AWWWWW that was so sad i feel bad for james i'm glad lily's there though i can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 20 wil be submitted ASAP! Miss Radcliffe~
I have been reading this story 4 ages. It is one of the few stories that don't get stupid in the middle. Luv it! Hope u write it till the end 'cause i h8 ppl who get sick of writing them and stop. leaving u hanging. awesome!
Author's Response: Lol, thanks! I definitely plan on completing this story and I already have two more in the works. Chapter 20 will be submitted as soon as possible! Miss Radcliffe~
Awww a sad chapter, did you really have to kill his parents?? :(
Poor James, but good thing Lily will be there to comfort him all the way!
Author's Response: Yes, unfortunately I did. This is not only a romance story but also my version of James and Lily's life and how the war affected them. Chapter 20 will be submitted as soon as possible! Miss Radcliffe~
Great chapter!!! looking forward to reading more. OMG im so sorry for james
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 20 will be submitted as soon as possible! Miss Radcliffe~
Wowww. I LOVED IT!!!!! I just loved the last scene when Lily is hugging James. I also loved Dumbledore's password. =D What a clever man. Anyways. I can't wait to see what happens after James 'sobs.' ;.(
Author's Response: Thanks! I've had ending scene in my mind for so long and it feels amazing to finally have it up. I think the password was actually an idea of my beta's, songbook99 so I'll pass the compliment on to her. Chapter 20 will be submitted as soon as possible! Miss Radcliffe~
“And then she’s like ‘oh James you’re so smart’!” boasted James.
HAHAH that's my fav line from the chapter. HAH i think i laughed at that for like a full 10 minutes....or maybe it was just thje caffine....ehhh w.e.
-Ashley
Author's Response: Lol, thanks. That was a kind of a spur-of-the-moment-I-want-James-to-be-arrogant-and-immature thing. Chapter 20 will be submitted as soon as possible! Miss Radcliffe~
Awwwwwwww...I feel so bad for James but I'm glad Lily finally knows the truth. Loved this chapter!!! Can't wait for the next one!!
Author's Response: Thanks! That's exactly the kinds of emotions I was trying to convey. Chapter 20 will be submitted as soon as possible! Miss Radcliffe~
A really emotional but great chapter!
I can't wait to see what happens next with James and Sirius and how they will get through the next few weeks or months!!!!
Cont soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're, shall I say, hooked! Chapter 20 will be submitted as soon as possible. Miss Radcliffe~
Wow. That's so sad. I hope James can move on. Where will he and Sirius live now? Please post chapter 20 soon!
Btw, good luck on your play!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're intrigued and thanks for for the good luck! Chapter 20 will be submitted as soon as possible. Miss Radcliffe~
awesome
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 20 will be submitted as soon as possible. Miss Radcliffe~
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. this chapter was so good! i cant wait till the next one!
(im so impatient!)
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. this chapter was so good! i cant wait till the next one!
(im so impatient!)
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 20 will be submitted as soon as possible. Miss Radcliffe~
wow. i started to get all teared up on the very last sentence...it just seemed so {insert word} that i loved, i really really did. please update soon, i cant wait to read wats next
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you're, shall I say, hooked! Chapter 20 will be submitted as soon as possible. Miss Radcliffe~
*eyeroll* Lily is really annoying. Freakishly stubborn. I just want to scream at her.
But good story, overall.
Author's Response: Ha ha. I know how you feel. It'll get better...soon. Chapter 19 is in the queue! Miss Radcliffe~
Wow, I haven't previously seen a story played out so perfectly!!! You're great, keep writing!
P.S. I recognized RENT reference off the bat,
where's my prize? ; D
Author's Response: Thanks! As for Rent, the prize went to te two first people who guessed the reference correctly. There will be more broadway references to come so keep a look out! Chapter 19 will be submitted shortly. Miss Radlciffe~
omg please update! this is a cliffhanger! i luv this it is awsum!keep up ur awsum awsum work
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 19 will be submitted shortly. Miss Radlciffe~
I loved it! it was amazing!update quickly!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll have chapter 19 up as soon as possible! Miss Radcliffe~
Great great great chapter! I feel sooooo bad for lily but I also want her to forgive and understand James at the same time, cause it wasn't really his fault ;) but i still think 'damn him for breakign her heart' anyways...update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I see your conflict, lol. I'll have chapter 19 up as soon as possible! Miss Radcliffe~
i love that chapter it was cute update soon though i wanna know whats gonna happen
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll have chapter 19 up as soon as possible! Miss Radcliffe~
This is just getting better. Funnily enough, the only Alyssa that I've ever met is a lot like this one.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, Alyssa is based on a girl I know with the same name and a similar spelling. I just took these characteristics she has and exaggerated them. I'll have chapter 19 up as soon as possible! Miss Radcliffe~
