This was pretty awesome and I liked how you showed how Harry found out because most stories don't do that so thank you.
lol i know it probably isnt suposed to be funny but lol rofl im laughing so hard im crying
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sirius black sorely underestimated the danger of curtains
Truly nice, itwas sweet. I liked when Harry appeared at the sceane. God job!
Truly nice, itwas sweet. I liked when Harry appeared at the sceane. God job!
I was so close to laughing out loud at Harry astonishment. That was excellent!
I was so close to laughing out loud at Harry astonishment. That was excellent!
That was really cool
That was really cool
That was really cool
AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thats probably the most romantic one-shot I ever read!!!! Good work!
Well done. Good characterizations, though I hated that Ron heard what Dumbledore said! But very consistant and true characters and good descriptions of their kissing, which is hard to do. Nicely done.
i love it! it's really good plz go on with this cuz it really nice i love how u show tha real defination of a real hero, i allway been in love with ron, and harry, but mostly ron and it's so nice to see that finally someone says he's a hero, so i LOVED IT!!! go on with this one cuz it's great!
I really loved this one, so please continue writing. It gives everyone a good description of what a hero really is.
That was....AWESOME!!!...I loved how you made Hermione and Harry see who he really is and then Mione let him see something more in there friendship...Oooo...great story...I LOVED IT!!...<3
Loved it! I actually got a bit misty when she said she was proud of him. You captured them very nicely.
it was really great, reminds me of my R/Hr fic.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!! Thank you for reviewing.