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Reviews For Icy Blue Eyes

Name: Harriet Evans (Anonymous) · Date: 03/29/05 7:03 · For: Barefeet and Insomnia
Hello! I liked this story - I thought you made a very good start. Personally I love stories that start with unanswered questions - such as Dumbledore having died and Hermione's expulsion. These intrigue me enough to keep me coming back. As to the use of "ill" instead of "sick", I'm not sure if your other reviewer was joking but (I'm going to be a little brit-picky here), generally English people do say 'I feel ill'. If they say, 'I feel sick' then stand clear because it means they're going to puke!( ie. vomit.) Well done, you have a good writing style and an original idea for a story.


Name: AmyChris (Signed) · Date: 03/28/05 22:12 · For: Barefeet and Insomnia
You're off to a great start! Good job! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I appreciate it. Next chapter is on it's way!

Author's Response: Oops! lol. "its" (just me and my perfectionist qualities sticking out here.)


Name: Gwendolyn Stanbury (Signed) · Date: 03/16/05 9:07 · For: Barefeet and Insomnia
I hope you take this story far!! It's going to be great, I just know it!! I love it! Keep it up!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate the review! I hope it goes far also!


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