Reviews For Carry On
Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 11/11/06 19:18
Chapter: Carry On

aww, i never thought about how hard the family problems were on Andy! How sad!!! :(

Reviewer: Fly to Dawn
Date: 06/14/06 4:41
Chapter: Carry On

*giggles* I ship Andromeda/Ted too. I liked your fic, which was peaceful, but a little sad.

Reviewer: I Love Severus Snape
Date: 03/17/06 17:03
Chapter: Carry On

I think the idea of this story is fantastic! It shows how much the Blacks endured all at the same time, and the impact is clear. The characterization is done so nicely. I especially love the emphasis that you put on Tonk's stubbornness... very in character. In addition, I love the dialect you have your characters use - it really adds to the story.

I did notice the following mistake: “You’re mum’ll try to make you change it back,” Ted answered with a laugh.
"You're" should be changed to "Your" because it's showing possession, not the contraction of 'you are'.

On the whole, great job! I enjoyed reading it.

Reviewer: Nadja
Date: 03/21/05 14:53
Chapter: Carry On

That was great. I've never seen a story like that before. I love Tonks as a kid. I also never really thought about what it would be like for people when Sirius was arrested... Great Story. :)

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 02/25/05 17:51
Chapter: Carry On

Well written, this is the first story I've seen focusing on the Tonks. The Black family was hit with soo much at one time! And I like how you show Nym as being stubborn when it came to her talents even at an early age.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for a most flattering review! Yeah, I can imagine Tonks would be a bit stubborn. As for the Black family getting hit hard . . . yeah, it really did, didn't it? Even with the way most of them turned out, there's got to be some feeling for them, right? Thanks again. Cheers! --- Loki

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