Reviews For Determination
Reviewer: Banjo Man
Date: 11/25/04 13:56
Chapter: One-Shot

I really Like it so far....Post Soon....

Reviewer: Scarlet Salamander
Date: 11/24/04 13:18
Chapter: One-Shot

Four girls, four personalities... I loved it.

Reviewer: QuIDdITch_PlaYA
Date: 11/14/04 18:14
Chapter: One-Shot

please keep up the story! i love it. keep up the good work

Reviewer: Cecilla
Date: 11/13/04 18:35
Chapter: One-Shot

That was wonderful. I loved how you captured each girl's personality, and why they were in the house they were in.

Reviewer: GwendolynJames
Date: 11/11/04 19:43
Chapter: One-Shot

Wonderful, as always. I'm still processing it - you made me think (which is very hard to do). ;) Your brain is much more complicated than mine is - and that's totally a good thing. :) Bravo, my dear. Can't wait for the next fic.

Reviewer: Amy Eagleton
Date: 11/11/04 0:47
Chapter: One-Shot

Wow! Your story was the first one that i read on this site and i loved it!! Well done on capturing all the girl's personalities and their feelings. 10/10!!

Reviewer: katie30
Date: 11/10/04 18:48
Chapter: One-Shot

WOW!!! Holy smokers!! I loved how you captured all of the girls' personlaities and, well, determination. Lol. Please keep writing and update soon. P.S. Also please try to read my story when it comes out. It's called Harry Potter and the Ruby Red Earrings. Laterz!!

Reviewer: muggle1311
Date: 11/10/04 18:37
Chapter: One-Shot

This promises to be a great story. I just loved it! You are truly one of the greatest authors! This story was just so... great! I loved it so much. Please write more!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Aspiration
Date: 11/10/04 18:17
Chapter: One-Shot

That is an exceptionally well written story. I love the way you show each girl's determination to break free, and especially like the ending sentence of chap. 1. Kudos to you! Hurry and write more, please!

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