Excellent. Dumbledore would be proud of them all. This really shows how the four houses are strong when united. Very well thought out.
Wow. This gave me goosebumps. It was bloody amazing if you dont mind me saying so.
I am going to favourite you and the story. I loved the way you wrote in different parts. I think it shows that Hogwarts taught them all something different and together everything can be achieved. Your so talented.. Loved it.
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THis is so deep u should really continue it.
THis is so deep u should really continue it.
THis is so deep u should really continue it.
THis is so deep u should really continue it.
Wow... Amazing. I love it! It is so cool how you use four different not so in the spotlight characters and use there houses to bring down the Death Eaters. I am stunned. God, I wish I could write like this...
I've read this again because i think it's fabulous and i would love to read, say, what happened before and after all of this.
I change what i previously said and i give it a 9 and 1/2 out of ten :)
I loved it!!!! I have read HP fanfic for ages,but yours is the first story I have ever felt moved to review. So good!
I loved it!!!! I have read HP fanfic for ages,but yours is the first story I have ever felt moved to review. So good!
Very good the way you twisted this story, of how you united all the houses through these four girls.
I LOVE THIS STORY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you are officaly one of my favorite authors!!!!!! :-)
Sweet! A little darker than I was expecting though!
i love your stoy! wow. wow.wow.wow.WOW! I love the way you protrayed each of their cahracteristics and thoughts this is a wonderful story
I really like this
its quite deep
it shows that even if the people wouldn't get along when they had a choice between other people when the need arises they can work together to pull down the dark
very nice and well written
but poor lavender i say padma got it the easiest
8/10
