Reviewer: moldy999
Date: 12/07/07 3:44
Chapter: Saved The Best For Last

aaaw very clever and cute

Reviewer: obbsessed_over_ron
Date: 07/25/06 13:15
Chapter: Saved The Best For Last

i loved your story!!

Reviewer: tonks_the_auror
Date: 04/21/06 7:07
Chapter: Saved The Best For Last

nice. i like it. i give it 8 FLASHY STARS!!

Reviewer: Tonks93
Date: 08/22/05 19:21
Chapter: Saved The Best For Last

I think your story was romantic it was great!

Reviewer: Tonks93
Date: 08/22/05 19:21
Chapter: Saved The Best For Last

I think your story was romantic it was great!

Reviewer: GryffindorGoddess
Date: 04/01/05 19:35
Chapter: Saved The Best For Last

way cute, but seemed kinda rushed at the end. you could have made their relationship a little more romantic once they found out they loved each other. i gave this fic a 10, but coulda done with some more fluff =) keep writing

Reviewer: Dumbledoress
Date: 03/25/05 16:24
Chapter: Saved The Best For Last

loved it... bt i got a lil confused wen u started saying bout wat happend the last tym ron went to see hermione about a break up an thats wen they got together i didnt quite get that bit u made it sound as if they were going back in time

Reviewer: SmileyWeasley
Date: 03/22/05 14:32
Chapter: Saved The Best For Last

I thought, overall, it was quite good. I didn't like the tense you used (passive past tense or something, I don't remember what it's called). I also don't like to idea of glamorizing pregnancy before marriage. It's not a good message to send to the young audience that reads these stories. Otherwise, keep up the good work!

Reviewer: PPMKatie
Date: 03/17/05 4:01
Chapter: Saved The Best For Last

Yea! Loved it!

Reviewer: ronanhermione
Date: 03/16/05 12:05
Chapter: Saved The Best For Last

I loved your story, but I would like more detail, like how you ended with they skipped the getting to know you part and how hermione got pregnant, what about including their wedding vouls or you know stuff like how he reacted to hermione getting pregnant. but it really was a good story

Reviewer: Phoebe Cat
Date: 03/01/05 22:33
Chapter: Saved The Best For Last

I think it is a very sweet story. I would hav liked to see more of the romance once they finally got together. You kind of skipped over that. I like the way you told it, good job!

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