Reviews For City of Angels
Reviewer: Aisha
Date: 09/05/05 9:23
Chapter: 1-Whats My Age Again

I think this story sounds quite dark, cool! Update soon, i wanna find out what happens!

Reviewer: dracosgreyblueeyes
Date: 04/22/05 14:31
Chapter: 1-Whats My Age Again

I really like this story and the edge you are giving it with her rebellous ways and her music. I am very curoius as to where this is going and how it is going to be a love story involving Draco. Please keep writing and I am adding this to my favorites. ~Tina p.s.I love how you used the quote from Brand New's "Sic Transit Gloria...Glory Fades" I don't listen to them much, but I love that song. "die young and save yourself."

Author's Response: thanks much-dont know if ill have alot of time to update since its been kinda hectic lately but the luv helps "make time" hehe `*hugs ps i didnt even know "die young and save yourself" was from a song lol

Reviewer: Kimberley
Date: 02/21/05 17:01
Chapter: 1-Whats My Age Again

I think this story can really go places. You seem to have a lot of raw talent as a writer, and from what I've read, the sky's the limit with your potential. I think you need to work on your flow, there were times when I had to re-read sentences to get them, but otherwise, I enjoyed the start to this story a lot! Keep it up! ~Kim

Author's Response: thanks you dont know how much it means to me ~katie

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