Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 06/20/06 17:17
Chapter: Confrontation

Ah, yes...the mayonnaise incident...

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 06/20/06 16:59
Chapter: Quiz time!

Question #2 does not provide enough information. It's quite possible that Alana Kedavra is searching for the best pastries in Ontario to poison and send to her mother-in-law. Okay...that's still not a truly evil purpose...

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 06/20/06 16:51
Chapter: The Do's and Don'ts of Executing your Evil Plan

What's wrong with wearing lederhosen? It generally helps to speed up the execution of the evil plot.

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 06/20/06 16:44
Chapter: Your Original Evil Style and Pointless Evil

Ahh...the little dandies...

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 06/20/06 16:39
Chapter: Your Evil Plan

I like evil lemonade...but evil Pepsi is my favorite...I know! Evil Pepsi Twist!

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 06/20/06 16:17
Chapter: Evil Etiquette

I have a hermit crab.

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 06/20/06 16:12
Chapter: Finding a Purpose and a Nemesis

Arch Nemeses (cont.)

Everyone = Umbridge
Dobby = matching socks
TOMROHT = pheasants

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 06/20/06 16:03
Chapter: So, you want to be an evil villain?

This is quite funny so far. It reminds me of "So You Want to Be a Death Eater."
http://www.mugglenet.com/funlists/deatheater.shtml

Reviewer: BlackRose6693
Date: 06/17/06 3:15
Chapter: Evil Etiquette

This chapter has to be the funniest so far! I loved the bit about the evil laughs and Professor Snape's catchphrase
"You fail", was so great. And who could forget the infamous “So you’re the one he said was ugly!”

Reviewer: Arwynn
Date: 06/14/06 20:01
Chapter: Your Evil Plan

you're my hero

Reviewer: seeka blood
Date: 06/10/06 14:05
Chapter: Epilogue - A success story/About the Author

please make I’m telling Mom! The younger sibling’s handbook i'm a young sibling i can tell you stuff

Reviewer: seeka blood
Date: 06/10/06 13:51
Chapter: Quiz time!

can capricorn fron inkheart pull of pink?

Reviewer: seeka blood
Date: 06/10/06 12:26
Chapter: Evil Etiquette

thank you i now what to do with a certian person now

Reviewer: padfooyroxmysoccks
Date: 06/07/06 14:34
Chapter: Your Evil Plan

Nemisis? WHO!?!?

Reviewer: padfooyroxmysoccks
Date: 06/07/06 14:27
Chapter: Evil Etiquette

NO TOGAS?!? What a bummer, Nevilshould get out imidiatly, if he can't wear a toga. then again, he can have a chicken.... Chicken, or no chickin THERE IS NO TOGA!!! it is NOT cool without a toga. Pluss the Weaslys are good and have multiple chickens. I'd rather have a dosen chickens and a toga, than 1 chichen and no toga!!

Reviewer: padfooyroxmysoccks
Date: 06/07/06 14:15
Chapter: Finding a Purpose and a Nemesis

LOL!! I the list at the end. especialy:l oveAll right, the whole Malfoy family = Harry Potter; The mayor of Hajawaka Kentucky = pie; Spiders = Ron Weasley; and (Harry Potter seems to have a lot of enemies…). What do mimes have againsed you, or what group of mimes are againsed you? (The mafia mimes are out to get me!! Thankfuly, they live in Italy so i am safe, here.)

Reviewer: just_the_contrary
Date: 06/06/06 18:03
Chapter: Your Evil Plan

This is one of the funniest stories I have ever read, fanfiction or not. I love the original idea, and using Neville to read the book is a stroke of genius. He's the most un-evil character in the books, so imagining him becoming evil is on its own hilarious. Also, I keep getting images of Dr. Evil from Austen Powers when reading this fic (hahaha). The advice given in this fic is actually very good, but at the same time very funny.
This review is part of the Humour Fic class I'm taking on the Beta Boards, so I'm supposed to identify the different types of humour in your fic. I can identify:
1. Insults, to some degree
2. Visual Gags
3. Parody (of the ...For Dummies books)

Also, Neville cackling evilly is a very funny picture (hence visual gags). I can see Voldemort using this self-help book, as it contains a lot of the tactics Voldemort uses. I have read some of your other fics, and they are downright hilarious. Amazing, good job! You made me laugh.

Reviewer: Luckyfel1x
Date: 06/01/06 17:25
Chapter: So, you want to be an evil villain?

I love this story!!! SO HILARIOUS!!! Added to my faves :) Keep Writing!

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 05/31/06 23:39
Chapter: Epilogue - A success story/About the Author

i loved it it is defenetly one of my faves

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 05/31/06 23:35
Chapter: Confrontation

I can't belive it was all over a seat and let's not forget the quill. but honestly it was bloody briliant. Neville was fantastic and well As i said Goyle couldn't get any thicker. congrats on a job well done

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