"Delusional." Well played, very well played.
you are a great poet, im in high school too so i can admire you finishing this while being swamped with homework
that story was really good and I think you got the characters just right :)
Enjoyed this chapter, will diffinitly keep reading. may I sugest not saying "something happened" makes it obvious that info is held back for purpose of plot and seems out of place with the style, which is Hermiones thoughts (more or less), Hermione wouldnt try to keep stuff hidden shes a caracter. I loved this story though, keep writting.
the one thing that i don like is the snappy ending, all details then it goes to... thwen they do this nd then and finally blah blah the end ron and hermione rok
That was good.
Author's Response: Thanks. =]]
well,some of the ideas are simply amaizing even thow I dnt fully understand why can't him just tell her after he has dealt whith lets say the ghosts of his past anyway my compliments,its pretty much faantastic and in good rowling style!
Author's Response: thanks for your compliments!!
did your chpt. get cut off?
This is a chapter?
Author's Response: I thought I put an end to the chapter in the right place. Thanks for your review.
that was just a friendly hug...right? that would be totally wierd if they went together...ah, well, i'll find out next chapter, won't i?
uh oh. not how i thought it would tur out. but that's good I like suprises!
I enjoyd his chapter. The jump thing was funny.
oooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Very suspenseful.
awwww. that's so sad! You are a very good author.
uh oh! i smell trouble!