Reviewer: Rose Molly Weasley
Date: 11/20/08 10:43
Chapter: Effect

"Delusional." Well played, very well played.

Reviewer: total_nerd_at_heart
Date: 08/13/08 2:52
Chapter: Epilogue

you are a great poet, im in high school too so i can admire you finishing this while being swamped with homework

Reviewer: hermionefan25
Date: 04/08/08 10:44
Chapter: Epilogue

that story was really good and I think you got the characters just right :)

hope xx

Reviewer: flashbat
Date: 01/26/08 2:37
Chapter: Old Friends

Enjoyed this chapter, will diffinitly keep reading. may I sugest not saying "something happened" makes it obvious that info is held back for purpose of plot and seems out of place with the style, which is Hermiones thoughts (more or less), Hermione wouldnt try to keep stuff hidden shes a caracter. I loved this story though, keep writting.

Reviewer: moldy999
Date: 12/15/07 13:05
Chapter: Old Friends

the one thing that i don like is the snappy ending, all details then it goes to... thwen they do this nd then and finally blah blah the end ron and hermione rok

Reviewer: Lassie
Date: 10/25/07 10:42
Chapter: Epilogue

That was good.

Author's Response: Thanks. =]]

Reviewer: deidre
Date: 09/04/07 11:29
Chapter: Epilogue

well,some of the ideas are simply amaizing even thow I dnt fully understand why can't him just tell her after he has dealt whith lets say the ghosts of his past anyway my compliments,its pretty much faantastic and in good rowling style!

Author's Response: thanks for your compliments!!

Reviewer: hollywood13
Date: 01/24/07 23:54
Chapter: Effect

did your chpt. get cut off?

Reviewer: shirley
Date: 10/10/06 18:23
Chapter: Effect

This is a chapter?

Author's Response: I thought I put an end to the chapter in the right place. Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/30/06 13:37
Chapter: Epilogue

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/30/06 13:32
Chapter: Repairs

that was just a friendly hug...right? that would be totally wierd if they went together...ah, well, i'll find out next chapter, won't i?

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/30/06 13:24
Chapter: Repercussion

uh oh. not how i thought it would tur out. but that's good I like suprises!

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/30/06 13:18
Chapter: Divulgence

*squeal* yay!

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/30/06 13:00
Chapter: Remembrance

Very good.

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/30/06 12:51
Chapter: Effect

that was...short...

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/30/06 12:50
Chapter: Cause

I enjoyd his chapter. The jump thing was funny.

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/30/06 12:45
Chapter: Advice

oh crud...

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/30/06 12:43
Chapter: New Direction

oooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Very suspenseful.

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/30/06 12:37
Chapter: Confrontation

awwww. that's so sad! You are a very good author.

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/30/06 12:33
Chapter: Aftermath

uh oh! i smell trouble!

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