Reviewer: Shadows_keeper21
Date: 06/11/11 13:22
Chapter: Chapter Four Yet We Must Not Be Foes

this story is so amusing! And I've gotta say that the shakespeare really makes it especially yours; if that even makes sense. I really like it!!!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 11/28/07 14:36
Chapter: Chapter Four Yet We Must Not Be Foes

I think this is the best chapter yet. I love all the odd detentions, not to mention the pairings. And I liked the bit about a rose having thorns as well as smelling sweet. I love Shakespear, but really don't understand it.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 11/28/07 13:39
Chapter: Chapter Two - Paper Faces On Parade

I have to say I got a few laughs from this chapter so who knows what I'll do when i read the third. It always amazes me how people wearing masks don't recognise each others voices. The guess who game between Draco and Snape was really funny. When Luna talked of the Sandman I got an image of Snape, can't think why, my madness most likely. When Ginny and Draco couldn't get back to the castle at first, it reminded me of something, either a book or film from years ago, wish i could remember. The fight in the entrance hall was exciting, suppose Hermione thought if I can't beet them, join them. Right, I'm off to the NEXT button.

Reviewer: xo_DracoHarry_ox
Date: 10/06/07 16:39
Chapter: Chapter Four Yet We Must Not Be Foes


Reviewer: purplerose
Date: 08/16/07 10:33
Chapter: Chapter Four Yet We Must Not Be Foes

This is a great story. AMAZING

Reviewer: golden_phoenix_luna
Date: 07/22/07 17:35
Chapter: Prologue and Chapter One - I Do Bite My Thumb, Sir

love the kinda cynical/almost loving relationship between Snape and Draco. and the fight was somehow funny. keep writing!

Reviewer: hmsoctopus
Date: 07/12/07 17:45
Chapter: Chapter Four Yet We Must Not Be Foes

That's so good! It's going on my favorites now! I really liked all the Seamus/Colin stuff . . . really funny! Update soon :D

Reviewer: rissarose
Date: 02/13/07 21:11
Chapter: Chapter Four Yet We Must Not Be Foes

i love this!!!! plz post more chapters THEY HAVE TO GET TOGETHER!!!!

Reviewer: Inquisitive Quill
Date: 01/18/07 2:36
Chapter: Prologue and Chapter One - I Do Bite My Thumb, Sir

lol emma watson!!! hmm i wonder where u got that idea!!!, love the first fight in the is chapter!

like the end parts of ginny and draco, they deny themselves but then they agree to go and do something

Reviewer: VioletMarauder82
Date: 08/09/06 17:33
Chapter: Chapter Four Yet We Must Not Be Foes

It's been 5 MONTHS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! When will you finally update? I love this story toooo much to get it out of my mind.
PLEASE hurry and update soon because I really am dying to know what happens. Please! I'm on the floor begging while typing this. Bye.

Reviewer: thisisfun
Date: 08/02/06 18:05
Chapter: Prologue and Chapter One - I Do Bite My Thumb, Sir

Hurry up and write so I can read it all ready! PLEASE!!!!!!!

Reviewer: LadyKt4u
Date: 07/14/06 15:47
Chapter: Chapter Four Yet We Must Not Be Foes

good story! :)

Reviewer: GodivaLashes
Date: 05/04/06 22:40
Chapter: Chapter Four Yet We Must Not Be Foes

I'm currently studying Romeo and Juliet in my English class... so i think that these are who the characters portray..
Ginny= Romeo
Snape= Nurse
Hermionie= Benvolio
Luna= Mercutio
Harry= Rosaline
Pansy= Paris
And I'm not sure if the Prince is portrayed by Dumbledore or Mcgonagall, and I don't know who Tybalt is. But if Ginny was Juliet, Ron would be a great Tybalt!

Author's Response: Pansy doubles as Tybalt, which means that the ending will be a little different from the actual play, but it'll still be amazing. We've worked it all out already. Also, the Prince is a mixture of McGonagall and Dumbledore, it really depends on the scene and what's going on and which character needs to be talking. Dumbledore is also Friar Lawrence. Eventually Lupin will come in for a chapter or two, but that's not until later.

Reviewer: GodivaLashes
Date: 05/03/06 23:20
Chapter: Prologue and Chapter One - I Do Bite My Thumb, Sir

I like your modern Hogwarts intake on Romeo and Juliet.

Two houses fighting (Gryffindor vs. Slytherin.... Capulets vs. Montagues)
Ginny being lovesick about Harry... Romeo being lovesick about Rosaline

Author's Response: glad you caught on.

Reviewer: VioletMarauder82
Date: 05/02/06 13:14
Chapter: Chapter Four Yet We Must Not Be Foes

I LOVE THUS STORY!!!! PLEASE submit the next chapter soon! I'm dying to know what happens!

Reviewer: DracoMalfoy_
Date: 04/16/06 9:14
Chapter: Chapter Four Yet We Must Not Be Foes

Hey JaX and Transcendancer!
I recently started getting into the Draco/Ginny relationship stories, and yours is one of the best. I love how you've incorporated William Shakespeare's 'Romeo & Juliet' theme into your story, I absolutely love that play! Your story is really romantic. The only thing that I have to say to you is that try not to make Draco too OOC - I know that you guys are trying to make him like Romeo in the play (all lovey-dovey and poetic), but still try to show his arrogant, sarcastic side, which is one of the reasons why we all love him so much! ;) But, enough about that, your story is still really great. I definitely look forward to upcoming updates *wink wink nudge nudge*!
See you next time,
Anna. :-)

Author's Response: don't worry, you get to see that side of him in the next chapter. the scenes you've seen him in so far haven't allowed him to act that way.

Reviewer: ginny777
Date: 04/15/06 0:59
Chapter: Chapter Four Yet We Must Not Be Foes

wonderful! My suggestion, make draco stay for winter and make pansy go!

Author's Response: don't worry, we already wrote out the next chapter. i (JaX) need to double check and make sure everythings okay before submitting it.

Reviewer: pigwidgeon315
Date: 03/30/06 15:22
Chapter: Chapter Two - Paper Faces On Parade

Look, no offence and all, but the part about Gabrielle Delacour was totally unbelieveable. Why would she go toHogwarts instead of Beaubatons? I give you a 5.

Author's Response: Because by the end of GoF, Fleur like Hogwarts better than Beauxbatons. And we have her and Bill married (we decided this before HBP came out). That way, for breaks, Gabrielle can stay with Fleur, and over the summer with her parents. Gabrielle is, after all, the thing that Fleur would miss the most. I don't understand why you gave our story a 5 just because of that minor detail. It has nothing to do with the plot of the story. Anyway, it's our stoyr, and we'll write it the way we want to. kthx.

Reviewer: Fly to Dawn
Date: 03/19/06 3:33
Chapter: Chapter Four Yet We Must Not Be Foes

Loved it! Lots of twists, and of course, romance!! *squee* I'd like to make a banner for this fic....please?

Author's Response: sure, that'd be great!!!

Reviewer: CaitlinFiona
Date: 03/17/06 22:52
Chapter: Chapter Four Yet We Must Not Be Foes

Very nice. I recently read Romeo and Juliet for my english class and spent quite a few hours writing character analysis papers on both Romeo and Juliet. Both Shakespeare's and JK Rowling's characters are very complex and I love the way you made them parallel each other. I also loved the fact that you chose Draco/Juliet and Ginny/Romeo parallels rather than Ginny/Juliet and Draco/Romeo. I especially enjoyed the fact that you incorporated other characters from Romeo and Juliet and paralleled them as well, I noticed Snape/Nurse, and Harry/Rosalynn. However, I could not figure out who was representing Tybalt and Benvolio. Would you mind sharing?

Author's Response: Oh, jeeze. i don't have those character outlines anymore! Gimmme a few days and I'll get them together for you. Yeah, we thought that Draco/Juliette and Ginny/Romeo fit better for the story.

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