Reviews For Lightning
Reviewer: bertiebott12
Date: 03/16/07 18:52
Chapter: The Night

This was great! It depicted the night perfectly!

Reviewer: potions_perfection
Date: 08/28/06 16:42
Chapter: The Night

Wow, so sad! Poor Lily and James. I really miss them. I thik I write Marader stuff so they can be "alive" still. =(

Reviewer: Snuffles985
Date: 05/07/05 4:33
Chapter: The Night

WOW! Out of ten i'd give that an 11 lol. It was brill. Where did you get such insperation! You said my fic were good, your poem's way better! Snuffles985:0) Woot!

Reviewer: MithrilQuill
Date: 03/16/05 20:04
Chapter: The Night

Not Bad, quite good actually, but i got confused somewhere in the middle, the firecracker thing, anyways it was good!

Author's Response: The firecraker is kind of like the spell to send sparks in the air from a wand. It said within one of he books that there was people celebrating and setting of "fireworks". Sorry to all who got confused!

Reviewer: GwenSandyhill
Date: 03/08/05 15:25
Chapter: The Night

Wow, great! DIE PETTIGREW DIE!!!! I think I speak for a lot of people when I say this.

Author's Response: I agree! If anyone does like Peter, please inform me, so I can shout your head off. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: MissLily0191
Date: 03/05/05 12:51
Chapter: The Night

wow, that was....like all i can say is wow!

Author's Response: They like me, they really like me!!! Thank you!!! I'm really not all that great a poems, but friends think im crazy when i say that, but... o well! Thanks again!!!

Reviewer: MrsHPotter
Date: 02/28/05 16:51
Chapter: The Night

er, i must ask: firecracker that spelled he is gone? I'm a bit confused, but it was pretty good. The mods refuse to approve my second chapter, but it's finished, fixed up even, and awaiting approval.

Author's Response: Thanks alot! I'm not doing any more though, just because I'm not the best on poems. That one was just something on my mind that needed to be written. Look for stories by me, coming to a website near you! lol!

Reviewer: BlackGryphon
Date: 02/26/05 17:55
Chapter: The Night

That's a cool take on what happened. 10 for you... -293845 for Peter... (he he he... FRY PETTIGREW!)

Reviewer: BlackGryphon
Date: 02/26/05 17:55
Chapter: The Night

That's a cool take on what happened. 10 for you... -293845 for Peter... (he he he... FRY PETTIGREW!)

Author's Response: Thanks! Not quite sure what the 293845 is for, but scat the rat!

Reviewer: immortal_evil
Date: 02/20/05 7:44
Chapter: The Night

DiE, pEtEr, DiE! he must DIE. muhahahahahahha. good poem. i still think peter should die and burn and cut into tiny pieces, etc.

Author's Response: Agreed!

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Makers of Fine Wands by CanisMajor 1st-2nd Years
Ollivander of Croton arrives in Athens in 382 BC with big dreams, noneof which...
James and Me by Northumbrian 6th-7th Years
Annabel is having a bad day. Her sudden and unexpected meeting with a face from...
Tom Riddle and the Cave of Living Waters by alittletiefling 6th-7th Years
What would happen if Tom Marvolo Riddle had been adopted by well-meaning squibs?...
FEATURED
It Takes Two to Tango by lucca4 3rd-5th Years
They cannot keep doing this; it is only a matter of whose resolve will break...
In The Heat Of The Morning by welshdevondragon 3rd-5th Years
Summary: In the heat of the morning, Katie and Leanne lie in the grounds...
Can't Fight the Moonlight by Acacia Carter 6th-7th Years
A life-changing disaster at work drives Neville Longbottom to seek aid from...
The History Teacher by iLuna17 6th-7th Years
Maybe he didn’t just love history, maybe he loved being a history teacher.
white on white by Padfoot11333 6th-7th Years
Three vignettes about scars, love, and sex.
CATEGORIES