Reviews For It Begins This Way
Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 03/11/05 10:11
Chapter: Prologue

I mean right clicking and then clicking on copy sorry. Then you go into the my account personal info bit and press paste.

Author's Response: But how do you get into my account bit without closing the quiz window? Unless you can do that anyway...because then you have to go back from the other persons account page where you got the quiz back to your own...I'll try it.

Author's Response: I did it, I did it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you so much, my boi is going to be soooo full of quizzes and stuff.. THANK YOU!!!!!!

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 03/11/05 10:10
Chapter: Prologue

You copy paste by hilighting it and right clicking then clicking on paste. :S Didint you know that? Or is it not working.

Author's Response: Hmmm....not working.

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 03/10/05 12:45
Chapter: Prologue

Well first you click on the liink from another author's bio. Then you do the quiz. Then it comes up with your answers and it has a code that you copy paste onto the 'my personal info bit'

Author's Response: Yes, but HOW to copy and paste is the question. lol

Reviewer: Harriet Evans
Date: 03/10/05 8:58
Chapter: Chapter One: Dark Clouds Before The Rain

Really well written... I particularly liked the scene in the church with Lupin/Snape - very atmospheric. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I hope to get more up soon.

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 03/09/05 10:44
Chapter: Prologue

What? Work? For a degree? How dare they! ;) P.S. On your bio, what do you mean copy paste stuff- like the quizzes?

Author's Response: Yeah, do you know how? I've tried, believe me, I've tried. Chapter 8 of TM+HBP has been submitted - finally.

Reviewer: fvweasley
Date: 03/08/05 5:37
Chapter: Chapter One: Dark Clouds Before The Rain

You have a great style and write well, so far so good! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try to update soon!

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 03/06/05 3:33
Chapter: Prologue

I just realised about the foreshadowing and it's depressed me. I wish James and Lily hadnt died. Mind you if they hadnt it would ha completely wrecked the whole series of Harry Potter........ *Looks thoughtful for ten minutes and then looks at Zetera staring at her* Oh yeah and I'm annoyed becasue you havent updated ANY OF YOUR STORIES!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Hmm...I shall think on that... . Sorry about the whole no updates thing - apparently my professors want me to actually work for my degree. Ha, no-one told me that was what college was about....

Reviewer: Evans
Date: 03/04/05 14:05
Chapter: Chapter One: Dark Clouds Before The Rain

Hi, I'm new to the whole fanfic thing, but I've been an HP fan since for about five years. Kudos to a well-crafted fanfic, i enjoy your extrapolation of both Snape and Lupin. Keep Writing!

Author's Response: Thank you, and welcome to fanfiction! I hope you keep reviewing!

Reviewer: LadyLupin827
Date: 03/03/05 18:43
Chapter: Chapter One: Dark Clouds Before The Rain

"Lily is pregnant!" And the dark clouds broke into a heavy rain. INCREDIBLE use of foreshadowing!!!!!!!!!! I was never good at it. I love all of your work so much that instead of adding all of your fan fics and poems to my favourites list I put you on my fav. authour list.

Author's Response: Wohoo! It means so much to me to be on someone's favourite authors list, when there are so many good authors. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: LadyLupin827
Date: 03/03/05 18:34
Chapter: Prologue

THAT WAS AMAZING!!! I'm sure that's exactly what was going through Remus' mind at the time and you kept Snape perfectly in canon, too. I wish I could give you 100, but sadly I can only give you a 10.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I wasn't sure if it was coming out properly. Thanks!

Reviewer: kuro_tenshi_LL
Date: 03/03/05 16:17
Chapter: Chapter One: Dark Clouds Before The Rain

grrr stupid landlord! poor lupin *cries* he's so poor it's path..pathe.. ahem. anyways, i like this chapter XD keep up the good work =3

Author's Response: Yay, thank you!

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 03/02/05 15:07
Chapter: Prologue

Die evil Landlord die!

Author's Response: Ha ha ha - I agree. OMG - 11.00 a.m. - I have to go to class!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 03/02/05 10:26
Chapter: Chapter One: Dark Clouds Before The Rain

Oh, good very very good. I really like that chapter. It was a good mixture of well everything. How dare the ministry throw lupin out?! That's so unfair.

Author's Response: Actually, the landlord threw Remus out when he learned he was a werewolf. Probably should have made that clearer - whoops! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Loki MM
Date: 03/01/05 18:27
Chapter: Chapter One: Dark Clouds Before The Rain

Woah --- awesome, awesome, awesome. The emotional content of this story is amazing (though I admit, due to Loki's lack of thought, the beginning confused her because I hadn't realized that the prologue is the end, so to speak). The characterization is wonderful, as is the dialogue, and the discription is good. Two things: In the Dumbledore and Trelawney scene (which was particular brilliance by the way), the first sentence Trelawney speaks needs a period at the end, not a comma, and there's a "womans" when you need "woman's." Picky grammatical things, however --- the story itself is brilliant, and the ending was perfect. Cheers!

Author's Response: Thanks Loki, you always pick up on the stuff that I miss, and help me make this better. I've made those changes - thank you! Sorry if the whole starting where I'll finish thing was a bit confusing, I just thought it would be cool to do the story in a circle. Nice to hear the characterization and story content is coming along well. Thanks again - I love your input.

Reviewer: Nadja
Date: 03/01/05 16:10
Chapter: Chapter One: Dark Clouds Before The Rain

Yay! New chapter! Woot! Good job, once again. It was loverly. Ummm... can't think of anything else to say that wouldn't sound stupid.... So... yeah, I liked it lots. :)

Author's Response: Yay - thank you!

Reviewer: IluvMySirius
Date: 03/01/05 9:14
Chapter: Chapter One: Dark Clouds Before The Rain

Yay!! First reviewer! I get what your doing now, flashbacks sort of? Wow i actually like that idea better! I'm anxious to see your interpretations on what happened in the past, it is something I always wondered about! Great chapter, love your ideas and creativity!! ~IluvMySirius

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm blown away by your kind reviews. I'm going to work the story back around to the 3rd of November 1981, where we left Remus in the first place. Thanks again!

Reviewer: IluvMySirius
Date: 03/01/05 9:07
Chapter: Prologue

Hey thats ok, whatever you feel will be best, I will definitely still read it! Thanks for the recommendations, I'm going to read them right now!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you. Enjoy!

Reviewer: Nadja
Date: 02/28/05 20:30
Chapter: Prologue

I could have sworn I already reviewed this one... Oh well... Anyways, I'm looking forward to reading the rest. I always like to read about Lupin and Snape, two of my favorite characters (yay!). I can't wait to see the rest!! Going insane!! Write faster!!

Author's Response: I see you're faithfully following all my stories - thank you! lol. Chapter 2 is here - yay!

Reviewer: IluvMySirius
Date: 02/28/05 17:44
Chapter: Prologue

I loved it!! you should definitely continue it; I would absolutely keep reading it!! This may be asking a lot (i know you have 3 stories started or something), but if you did continue you should at least write on until Remus finds out the truth about Sirius, (even though i know he does find out the truth it would still kill me to read a story where he doesn't). Anyway I'm sure you were probably planning that so moving on... Up until I read this story i had only read romance and some humor stories, but then I saw this story and it caught my attention, I love it and hope you keep it up! (Sorry, but i just felt like I had to say all that and let you know EXACTLY how I felt!) ~IluvMySirius

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you! I'm afraid I have to disappoint though, I am planning to do this story in a circular motion, so that the last chapter will have Remus back where he was at the Prologue. I hope that doesn't put you off my fic! You seem to have the same thirst for Marauder antics as I, have you read the truely astounding "Veiled Revelations" by erikthephantom? The sequel "Between Now and Then" is amazing too. I highly recommend those. Hope I haven't driven you away! ~ Zee

Reviewer: Arina
Date: 02/23/05 18:59
Chapter: Prologue

I like it (remus is so awesome). I like your other fics to. Please post soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much - I'll do my best but with three stories on the go, it's tough. And don't forget college...

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