Reviews For It Begins This Way
Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 05/22/05 6:09
Chapter: Chapter Three: A Suspicious Mind

Yay! UPDATE! Completely worth the wait, though slightly shorter than i would have liked, really well written- the usual compliments. i loved the ending and the way you worked in the quote 'picking us off one by one' you are really talented when it comes to writng your dialougue that you keep the characters true to the books. 11/10 Well done and I want more! :):):):):)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I really didn't like this chapter. Please see my bio for news of updates.

Reviewer: Transfiguration_Teacher
Date: 05/12/05 18:21
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Saviour is Born

Two words ... HUNGER STRIKE!!!!

Author's Response: I know, I know, it must be the login problems that are holding this up. Chapter 4 was definately posted. :-(

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 05/06/05 17:22
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Saviour is Born

sosososososocool!!! I loved how some parts were really sad and others made me laugh out loud-awesome story, update soooooon!!! 100!!!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks, the next chapter has been posted.

Reviewer: Transfiguration_Teacher
Date: 05/03/05 16:33
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Saviour is Born

Are you trying to kill me??? UPDATE, please, I beg you!!!

Author's Response: I'm so sorry, but for once this has nothing to do with me! I submitted the next chapter about a week ago, I have no idea what the hold-up is.

Reviewer: LadyLupin827
Date: 04/22/05 21:45
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Saviour is Born

"Look at him, isn't he perfect?" "He looks like you dumped boiling water on his head." "Shut it, Padfoot, new-borns look like that." "He looks a bit like you." "I know, isn't it great?" "Poor kid." LOLLOLLOLOLOL "No, Wormtail, I stole this one." HAHAHAHAHAHA! As you can see I was highly amused by this chap. I feel very upset about Remmy though. *sobs* Definately a 10!!!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks. I have updated, but it's not posted yet.

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 04/20/05 10:42
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Saviour is Born

Attention: Hey everyone. I seem to have to log into Mugglenet every 5 seconds, so it's impossible for me to update until they fix that. I know a lot of you are having the same trouble, so I'm sure you understand.

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 04/18/05 11:56
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Saviour is Born

:( u :( p :( d :( a: ( t :( e :( please.

Author's Response: Aww, I will. Exams suck.

Reviewer: CurlyQue
Date: 03/28/05 20:16
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Saviour is Born


Author's Response: I'll try as soon as I can - I'm very busy. Thanks!

Reviewer: Kelsid
Date: 03/26/05 15:18
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Saviour is Born

I loved this story!!! The way all of them are together... ah, it makes me so happy! Please update soon, this is going straight on my favorites list!

Author's Response: Thank you - updates asap!

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 03/26/05 7:44
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Saviour is Born


Author's Response: As soon as possible - I swear!

Reviewer: kuro_tenshi_LL
Date: 03/24/05 15:11
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Saviour is Born

lol i likes its! XD "Of course, I'll have to bite him first, but that shouldn't be a problem" lol. i

Author's Response: Ha ha ha - glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Harriet Evans
Date: 03/22/05 10:22
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Saviour is Born

Very enjoyable chapter. I loved all the little "in jokes" about Harry's name and how he'd never get anywhere with a name like that etc.

Author's Response: Yay, thank you! I thought those would be a nice touch.

Reviewer: CurlyQue
Date: 03/21/05 19:24
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Saviour is Born

This story has been on my favorite list for awhile, and I hadn't remembered reading your story. So I was going through and...look what I found! xD I love your story. Its realy funny and it has the four maruaders together nicely. Thank you. 10!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. I'm glad you found it again!

Reviewer: IluvMySirius
Date: 03/18/05 15:29
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Saviour is Born

Awesome chapter. I absolutely LOVE Sirius and his little comments! It is just the perfect touch! Cant wait for more! ~IluvMySirius~

Author's Response: Aww, thank you, I'm glad Sirius is true to character.

Reviewer: Transfiguration_Teacher
Date: 03/17/05 16:51
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Saviour is Born

Hey, thanks for the prompt update!!! I liked this chapter a lot, especially because you wrote it in a way that allows the reader to get a glimpse of the relationships between the four men. For a moment there you truly see the friends that "would have died, rather than betray" their friends. You have a couple of spelling mistakes, and I even hate to mention that, but the story is so good that as a reader I would like nothing to distract my attention from it ... annoyingly nitpicking of me, I know!!! :-( Congratulations, again ... and this, ladies and gentlemen, is what a 10 looks like!

Author's Response: Wow, I'm speechless - thank you so much! I'm so glad that this chapter worked out the way I wanted it too - I'm really happy that you caught a glimpse of Rowling's message. Thanks for alerting me to the spelling mistakes - I like things to be perfect, so don't worry about nitpicking! Yay - 10!

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 03/17/05 11:32
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Saviour is Born

*Drama. Maybe I should learn to spell, oh well that's number 10 on my IMPORTANT THINGS I NEED TO DO BEFORE I DIE list.

Author's Response: Ha ha ha - oh, you're funny! Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha - I love that.

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 03/17/05 11:31
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Saviour is Born

Now THIS is what my dramam teacher means by pacey. It has a really solid plot, things keep coming and there isn't any boring bits. It's also really funny with all the comments about Harry's name and Remus's hormones. Very enjoyable chapter.. all I have to say really.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you, I wasn't sure if this chapter was working.

Reviewer: Loki MM
Date: 03/16/05 19:13
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Saviour is Born

Whee! I'm first reviewer again! "He looks a bit like you." "I know, isn't it great." "Poor kid." I love that exchange, very in character and very funny. Proof that there can be excellent comic relief in tragedy. "Through the class window that seperated them from Lily," . . . oops; you've got a typo there. a quote mark that doesn't need to be there after James carries his son to his wife. Forgive my nitpicking, I love this chapter, really. Everyone is in character an very funny. I take it Peter just joined Voldemort? And Lily and Remus were great; awesome job with them. All in all, an chapter of an excellent fic. Cheers!

Author's Response: Thanks - I try to do my best when it comes to exchanges between characters. Thanks for pointing out the typo, I must correct that. Don't worry about nitpicking, if it helps, then I don't care! We'll find out more about Peter soon. Thanks!

Reviewer: Nadja
Date: 03/16/05 19:08
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Saviour is Born

"That's a relief, because he looks like a tamato." - That's great!! I'm so proud of Peter. He has a sense of humor!! ... or maybe he was being serious... Ah well. I like all of the hormonal references with Remus. Very good chapter. Reading it was horrible though because this thingey kept on popping (spelling?) up and I couldn't read. GRAAAHHH! I was about ready to kill the computer... but then it went away. Okay, I think I'm done with that completely unnecessary (I hate spelling!!) story. I'm off. *flies away Superman-style*

Author's Response: I felt that as Peter was one of the Marauders, he couldn't have been just a nobody, even if he only hung around with the others for his own gain. Glad you liked it - YAY!

Reviewer: Transfiguration_Teacher
Date: 03/15/05 21:04
Chapter: Chapter One: Dark Clouds Before The Rain

Now, I know that you've probably heard this from someone else, but I'm still gonna say it. YOU ARE A GREAT AUTHOR. And you've definitely made it to my favorite author list. Although I confess I'm more into the romantic-angsty fics, I found the beginning of this story to be very compelling. The bit where Dumbledore hears the prophecy feels like JKR herself would have (or has, we don't know) written it. Keep up the good work and don't leave us without an update for long. p.s. I've come really close to stalking you, haven't I?

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so very much. I'm so glad you like my stuff to that extent, and to compare an extract of my work with the mighty JKR has me speechless. Thank you so much. Hey, stalk away, it might be fun!

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