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Name: magic_chick (Signed) · Date: 11/01/05 13:31 · For: Hermione's Solution
Hurry up!!! i loved this chapie it's awsome i love it oh hurry up please! 10/10

Name: hawaiianhulagal (Signed) · Date: 10/28/05 3:07 · For: Hermione's Solution
I think the death of Eliza has caused Hermione to become unstable, a bit. Kill Voldemort?! Surely not just her and Draco! Harry and Ron should be involved as well. And what are Hermione's parents reaction going to be this tragic news?

Author's Response: i was starting to get mad, but i just realized my next chapter isn't up yet, even though i submitted the killing voldy issue won't be big, it's hermione's temporary solution brought on by denial...hence the name of the next chapter, "Denial to Depression."

Name: forgotten_poems (Signed) · Date: 10/27/05 19:28 · For: It's Not That Easy
Even though I'm not a Hoobastank fan at all, the song fit in to the chapter well. And I like how you showed Hermione's indecision between Ron and Draco. This happens in a lot of D/Hr fics, but here it's not too cliche or overdone. The only problem is that there is no PA system at Hogwarts (at least that JK Rowling has mentioned; if there was it would have been included in canon by now). Also, the HP books were written for the 1990's; "The Reason" came out in 2004. Try to watch out for time errors!

Author's Response: i already comented on the PA system. that is what i referred to it as. it is not an actual PA system, it is like at the Quidditch World Cup. My story is getting better and better as I go. Once again, 13 year old author, not so great. 16 year old author, little bit better....i will TRY to write more throughout the winter if i don't have anything to do. i want to make a different begining that is more acurate as to why Hermy and Draco would get togehter. I realize that my story is OOC and I'm not saying that it's not! I want to fix it, I just don't have the time right now.

Name: forgotten_poems (Signed) · Date: 10/27/05 19:16 · For: Today
You need to explain more in the story. For instance, why is Hermione so morbid in this fic? In canon she's not exactly smiles and rainbows all the time, but she's definitely not obsessed with perfection. And throwing Draco Malfoy in the broom closet is just too OOC; she wouldn't ever be that desperate. Also, Peeves would never take orders from a student (with the exception of Fred and George in OotP) no matter what he was threatened with. Sorry if it sounds like I'm being harsh, but I'm just pointing out where you could improve. This is a good fic--it really is--but you should try to justify OOC-ness next time.

Author's Response: i know...but you have to understand. I was like 13 when I started this story. I'm 16, and i want to rewrite the whole begining, but 1. I don't have to time, and 2. some of my fans would be mad at me. I would love to put both versions up, but my main issue is time!

Name: luvertits (Signed) · Date: 10/20/05 20:52 · For: Hermione's Solution
im dying 2 kno wat happens next, plz hurry!

Name: queen of the damed (Signed) · Date: 10/16/05 19:30 · For: Hermione's Solution
write more and more plz im so your number one fan you are so wicked i love your storys i love u i love u i love u plz update soon.

Name: mrs roonil wazlib (Signed) · Date: 10/16/05 11:20 · For: Perfection
please hurry up! i luv your fic so dont bug me!

Name: tearry_gurl (Signed) · Date: 10/07/05 9:27 · For: Hermione's Solution
WRITE MORE NOW!!!!!!! this story is sooooooooooo awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Name: WICCA_182 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/05 21:41 · For: Hermione's Solution
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what ther nhell is hermione going to do P.S i agree with 'luvertits'

Name: luvertits (Signed) · Date: 09/11/05 21:37 · For: Hermione's Solution
this story just keeps getting better and i think DRACO is the sweetest guy plz write more soon

Name: Brittasia (Signed) · Date: 08/26/05 18:04 · For: Hermione's Solution
great story...i can't wait to see what happens, update soon!

Name: DracoHerm06 (Signed) · Date: 08/20/05 17:44 · For: Hermione's Solution
Oh and I agree about what you said. the second half is way better! Update soon!

Name: DracoHerm06 (Signed) · Date: 08/20/05 17:41 · For: Hermione's Solution
Ooo...nice...which way will he go? stay loyal to her or to Him? Good job!

Name: DracoHerm06 (Signed) · Date: 08/20/05 17:35 · For: Sticky, and Wet
Wow...very interesting...cant wait to see what happens next!

Name: DracoHerm06 (Signed) · Date: 08/20/05 17:27 · For: Strange and Different
Oh hell no! Haha...that was good! Excellent job!

Name: DracoHerm06 (Signed) · Date: 08/20/05 17:18 · For: Hermione, What's Wrong?
my good god! I cant stand the suspense...

Name: DracoHerm06 (Signed) · Date: 08/20/05 17:12 · For: The Magic Night
Holy God! That was totally random. Lol. Iteresting and confusing but still well written. Definately hooked. lol. Wonder how hermione will take this....he prob wont tell her though...hm...

Name: DracoHerm06 (Signed) · Date: 08/20/05 17:02 · For: It's Not That Easy
Yes, song was a bit cheesy but fit *perfectly* lol. All the words made sense coming from him...im interested to see where this goes...good job!

Name: DracoHerm06 (Signed) · Date: 08/20/05 16:38 · For: Yesterday
I was a bit confused by the warnings...are those for future chapters or just a joke? Good job otherwise!

Name: SwedishLittleWich (Signed) · Date: 08/19/05 4:17 · For: Hermione's Solution
Ehh.. I don't like Hermione when she's pregnant.. Hmm, what will she do when the 'tummy is bigger'? Lol, dress in big clothes? LOL :D

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