Reviewer: magic_chick
Date: 11/01/05 13:31
Chapter: Hermione's Solution

Hurry up!!! i loved this chapie it's awsome i love it oh hurry up please! 10/10

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal
Date: 10/28/05 3:07
Chapter: Hermione's Solution

I think the death of Eliza has caused Hermione to become unstable, a bit. Kill Voldemort?! Surely not just her and Draco! Harry and Ron should be involved as well. And what are Hermione's parents reaction going to be this tragic news?

Author's Response: i was starting to get mad, but i just realized my next chapter isn't up yet, even though i submitted the killing voldy issue won't be big, it's hermione's temporary solution brought on by denial...hence the name of the next chapter, "Denial to Depression."

Reviewer: forgotten_poems
Date: 10/27/05 19:28
Chapter: It's Not That Easy

Even though I'm not a Hoobastank fan at all, the song fit in to the chapter well. And I like how you showed Hermione's indecision between Ron and Draco. This happens in a lot of D/Hr fics, but here it's not too cliche or overdone. The only problem is that there is no PA system at Hogwarts (at least that JK Rowling has mentioned; if there was it would have been included in canon by now). Also, the HP books were written for the 1990's; "The Reason" came out in 2004. Try to watch out for time errors!

Author's Response: i already comented on the PA system. that is what i referred to it as. it is not an actual PA system, it is like at the Quidditch World Cup. My story is getting better and better as I go. Once again, 13 year old author, not so great. 16 year old author, little bit better....i will TRY to write more throughout the winter if i don't have anything to do. i want to make a different begining that is more acurate as to why Hermy and Draco would get togehter. I realize that my story is OOC and I'm not saying that it's not! I want to fix it, I just don't have the time right now.

Reviewer: forgotten_poems
Date: 10/27/05 19:16
Chapter: Today

You need to explain more in the story. For instance, why is Hermione so morbid in this fic? In canon she's not exactly smiles and rainbows all the time, but she's definitely not obsessed with perfection. And throwing Draco Malfoy in the broom closet is just too OOC; she wouldn't ever be that desperate. Also, Peeves would never take orders from a student (with the exception of Fred and George in OotP) no matter what he was threatened with. Sorry if it sounds like I'm being harsh, but I'm just pointing out where you could improve. This is a good fic--it really is--but you should try to justify OOC-ness next time.

Author's Response: i know...but you have to understand. I was like 13 when I started this story. I'm 16, and i want to rewrite the whole begining, but 1. I don't have to time, and 2. some of my fans would be mad at me. I would love to put both versions up, but my main issue is time!

Reviewer: luvertits
Date: 10/20/05 20:52
Chapter: Hermione's Solution

im dying 2 kno wat happens next, plz hurry!

Reviewer: queen of the damed
Date: 10/16/05 19:30
Chapter: Hermione's Solution

write more and more plz im so your number one fan you are so wicked i love your storys i love u i love u i love u plz update soon.

Reviewer: mrs roonil wazlib
Date: 10/16/05 11:20
Chapter: Perfection

please hurry up! i luv your fic so dont bug me!

Reviewer: tearry_gurl
Date: 10/07/05 9:27
Chapter: Hermione's Solution

WRITE MORE NOW!!!!!!! this story is sooooooooooo awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: WICCA_182
Date: 09/11/05 21:41
Chapter: Hermione's Solution

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what ther nhell is hermione going to do P.S i agree with 'luvertits'

Reviewer: luvertits
Date: 09/11/05 21:37
Chapter: Hermione's Solution

this story just keeps getting better and i think DRACO is the sweetest guy plz write more soon

Reviewer: Brittasia
Date: 08/26/05 18:04
Chapter: Hermione's Solution

great story...i can't wait to see what happens, update soon!

Reviewer: DracoHerm06
Date: 08/20/05 17:44
Chapter: Hermione's Solution

Oh and I agree about what you said. the second half is way better! Update soon!

Reviewer: DracoHerm06
Date: 08/20/05 17:41
Chapter: Hermione's Solution

Ooo...nice...which way will he go? stay loyal to her or to Him? Good job!

Reviewer: DracoHerm06
Date: 08/20/05 17:35
Chapter: Sticky, and Wet

Wow...very interesting...cant wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: DracoHerm06
Date: 08/20/05 17:27
Chapter: Strange and Different

Oh hell no! Haha...that was good! Excellent job!

Reviewer: DracoHerm06
Date: 08/20/05 17:18
Chapter: Hermione, What's Wrong?

my good god! I cant stand the suspense...

Reviewer: DracoHerm06
Date: 08/20/05 17:12
Chapter: The Magic Night

Holy God! That was totally random. Lol. Iteresting and confusing but still well written. Definately hooked. lol. Wonder how hermione will take this....he prob wont tell her though...hm...

Reviewer: DracoHerm06
Date: 08/20/05 17:02
Chapter: It's Not That Easy

Yes, song was a bit cheesy but fit *perfectly* lol. All the words made sense coming from him...im interested to see where this goes...good job!

Reviewer: DracoHerm06
Date: 08/20/05 16:38
Chapter: Yesterday

I was a bit confused by the warnings...are those for future chapters or just a joke? Good job otherwise!

Reviewer: SwedishLittleWich
Date: 08/19/05 4:17
Chapter: Hermione's Solution

Ehh.. I don't like Hermione when she's pregnant.. Hmm, what will she do when the 'tummy is bigger'? Lol, dress in big clothes? LOL :D

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