bumpz!! when you posting the nxt bit up?
Author's Response: Well, I wrote this all about 5 years, and it's quite crappy compared to my writing now. Ummm....I probably won't finish it. Maybe soon I'll make a new one, how bout that?
DUN DUN DUUUUUUNN LOL
KILL THE DARK WIZARD MURDER HIM INFRONT OF HIS FOLLOWERS LET HERMIONE'S BABY BE A GIRL
XOXO
MELDINA
huh i would hate to be perfect im a swear-aholic cant help just get angry real easy. better then being an up-tight bitch
No offence, this is just my opinion but I dont really like this story, everyone is too ooc and it lacks alot of substance, it made me feel sick in a lot of places, first being that draco had to have sex with pansy & the fact that he raped hermione. I felt as though I would be physically sick. probably not the best emotion one wants to be feeling when reading a story. I cant say I enjoyed the feeling of wanting to throw up most of the way through it. I do like the start though, & the theme of hermione not wanting to be perfect though that theme doesnt seem to carry on throughout the story just at the start.
omg you need to continue!!!! is hermione's baby a girl or a boy? plz update!
"The Draco Malfoy that could cause a nun to denounce her title if she saw him smile." ROTFLMAO, that's my favorite part!!!!!
“The password is: Bertie Botts is a nancy boy.” that is frickin hilarious
“The password is: Bertie Botts is a nancy boy.” that is frickin hilarious
oh come ON!!!!!.when is next chapter coming??????!!!!!!!!
You have CERTAINLY matured as an author throughout this story, at first i didn't think that this would be anything but humorous and immaturely light-hearted, but now i see that i am wrong and you have came such a long way!
Oh no...my name is annie 'to be' felton...can't be two women in his life! haha jk jk....like that'll ever happen =(
wow O.O Hermione is going to have a VEEEEERRRRy 'fun' time with that!
i can't wait for the next chapter the dtory is real intresting keep writing
this sounds good. I like the setup, the way you have written Hermione's p.o.v is really very good too.
its ok, i like your wrinting style but i sort of wish hermoine wasnt pregnant. And the whole hermoine goes after voldemort is kind of harry's thing so... I dont know, its your story.
What you should do is, make a livejournal for this purpose and post the originals on it and contunue with the sensored versions on mugglenet :)
WhoA!!! ok !! so not happening! finish the story i might die of suspense
Author's Response: i wish i could, but these mugglenet people insist on sensoring me. i can't post it the way i wrote it, and for stupid reasons. if you really what to know, email me and i will give you the next 2 chapters
