Hmm... In my mind it has to be Draco and Hermione (the smirk is too closely linked with Draco for me for it to be anyone else), though I, being a Hermione/Snape shipper like that idea more. I like the way you left it open to interpretation - stories that have closure all the time get too boring. And you're poem's awesome too!!
~Tickled Pink~
I didn't really get the story, but the poem is great! Keep up the good work
I am actually suggesting a younger Snape with a pretty Slytherin girl in his year. Let me know what you think!
I liked it, a fic that makes you think, and it was well written as well. I think it might be some impossible pairing Severus/Narcissa, or maybe even Tom Riddle/McGonagall, (as students obviously) where the attraction could be more an obsession than love.
This was beautiful. Simply beautiful. Fascination? Isn't that the name of a song...
oh yeah and, ginny's hair is fine, her skin is fair, and draco DOES think she is bitch!
you should REALLY make it about draco and ginny! because why would james/snape think that lily/hermione is a bitch?
that was nice even though it left me pondering
Absolutely lovely.I think you are one of the best writers on mugglenet fanfiction.Ihave to say "Delightfull Pain" did sound a little repulsive but then I found it very deep.I love reading tradgedies-er ,once in a while but "Facsination"is so lovely! I like to think of it as a James/Lily FanFic.
So totaly awesome!! You have to continue!! i have to say i don't think it is harry or ron with hermione cuz they wouldn't refer to her as a bitch. I think that it was a lily/james thing or something like that
So totaly awesome!! You have to continue!! i have to say i don't think it is harry or ron with hermione cuz they wouldn't refer to her as a bitch. I think that it was a lily/james thing or something like that
as usual, an awesome story. all your stories are awesome, actually. i think you should continue the story. it could go a lot of ways depending on who you decide the characters are.
I think you should continue the story....maybe even continue to keep the characters a secret, at least until you can figure out who you want them to be :) I really enjoyed your writing though, and would like to see this story continued.
i think it should be draco and hermoine!
I kinda thought that it was Lily/James...but now that you mention it, it could be somehting a little...different like D/H or S/H...
Wow... I think this is Draco and Hermione. Great Job! The contrast and difference between this story and Temporary is magnificent, but I like it =].
