Reviews For I Loved Him First
Reviewer: stickm
Date: 05/05/05 10:42
Chapter: Peter Pettigrew

Dun Dun Dunnn! I get the feeling that they won't stay i peace for long! Bring it on I say!

Reviewer: Memorable
Date: 04/26/05 19:32
Chapter: O.W.L.s

Well done- i loved your ideas. by the way i finally found caly

Author's Response: lol

Reviewer: Laudomia
Date: 04/22/05 19:09
Chapter: James

Clever idea to make Petunia a witch enrolled in Hogwarts. Jealousy over James would explain a lot about Petunia's feelings toward Harry. Good job!

Reviewer: Caly
Date: 04/21/05 18:32
Chapter: O.W.L.s

Good. One thing I didn't get: What about Jamie? If Petunia invites Jamie, there will be six people caming + the parents. That a lot. So good, so far.

Author's Response: Actually, CALY, there would be seven kids, remember, Lily??? Besides, right now I plan to have the parents not come. Anyway, remember, in Outbursts By the Seashore, there were a lot of kids there too!!

Reviewer: Caly
Date: 04/21/05 18:26
Chapter: Meeting Luisa

At first I read "And she kissed Jamie on the mouth and..." JAMIE!?! I was like "What the heck!?!" Then I found out I just misread. Luckily!

Reviewer: danfan
Date: 04/20/05 22:11
Chapter: O.W.L.s

nice nice nice! keep going...

Reviewer: Irresistable Poison
Date: 04/19/05 2:20
Chapter: O.W.L.s

Lol I don't have any issues with this chapter either! It's going to be fun to see the Marauders and Petunia going camping,

Reviewer: stickm
Date: 04/18/05 11:09
Chapter: O.W.L.s

Ha I'm the first reviewer yet again! Your writing style has come on in leaps and bounds I didn't notice any typos or had issues with they way you had written anything which, as you know, is very unusual for me! So take this as a compliment and provide us with an update very soon :)

Reviewer: danfan
Date: 04/12/05 1:09
Chapter: Meeting Luisa

nice work dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 keep it up tho

Reviewer: Irresistable Poison
Date: 04/11/05 22:23
Chapter: Meeting Luisa

hehe she sounds so much like Luna, that's really good. this is probably one of my favourite chapters but just one little thing - just remember that Remus, Sirius and James would have had to like Peter a lot, and trusted him, otherwise he would not have been made Secret Keeper. So try to remember that when you write him, and don't characterise him as this completely annoying and whiney person. Not that you have yet, but I've read some fics that could have been grat except they slipped up with Peter. In my opinion anyway. Thanks for the quick update!

Author's Response: Thnx for warning me. I'll try to not make Peter to annoying and whinney. Just sorta pathetic.

Reviewer: Irresistable Poison
Date: 04/10/05 11:45
Chapter: Young Love

Heh, that was sweet and cute but I second stickm's comment. I really enjoyed this chpater, please update soon!

Reviewer: stickm
Date: 04/09/05 17:46
Chapter: Young Love

Hey glad you put the fluffy warning up before I read this and I know I'm eager but I just can't wait for James to realise this misplaced affection for Petunia is wrong and it's Lily whom he really loves. Then let the cat fights begin! Meow!

Reviewer: Caly
Date: 04/09/05 15:11
Chapter: Young Love

*sniff* that was kind of sad and kind of not-sad...I don't know...Write more!

Author's Response: Sad? I don't get you! That chapter was supposed to be a fluffy, lovey-dovey chapter. Sad is yet to come... lol

Reviewer: Lefty_Girl
Date: 04/01/05 18:12
Chapter: James

i like this story...it's quite creative. the plot is really original! :) it's great how u described everyone, also.

Reviewer: Irresistable Poison
Date: 03/18/05 8:48
Chapter: First Kiss

The only thing I didn't really like was how James said he didn't/couldn't love Lily. It didn't really seem in character, but besides that it was good.

Reviewer: stickm
Date: 03/17/05 7:38
Chapter: First Kiss

Hooray, again no criticism this chapter seems to have it all, humour, explanations and a little romance to shake things up a bit! And by the way... how did you manage an update so quickly?

Author's Response: Just had a lot of time I guess. Now I don't so you guys may have to wait. Sorry. p.s. Thanks for reviewing so much, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: danfan
Date: 03/17/05 1:00
Chapter: First Kiss

woo! nice job! keep it up im checking regularly for another chpt or two!!!! come o...u no u want to...

Reviewer: Caly
Date: 03/16/05 20:42
Chapter: First Kiss

Hey, not bad, eben though I didn't get it. But it was interesting. Go on, write more chapters!

Author's Response: Thnx alot... (grrrrr)

Reviewer: Caly
Date: 03/16/05 20:40
Chapter: First Kiss

Hey, not bad, even though I didn't really get it. Keep going, write more chapters.

Reviewer: stickm
Date: 03/15/05 12:31
Chapter: Outbursts By The Seashore

No criticism whatsoever but... only joking! You've hit the nail on the head with this one! It was spot on ;)

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