My favorite part of this poem has got to be the ending. "The-Boy-They-Will-Forget" That is just so great- not that he wil be forgotten but I mean it is a powerfeul ending to the poem.
The only lines in this poem that I didn't totally like are these:
Just keeping it all together when
Others think you'll fail
I think the when should go in the second line so it's "When others think..." It just makes more sense to me that way. But if it makes sense to you the way you have it- feel free to ignore me. So anyways, good job on this poem.
Poor Harry! =( Poor poor Harry!
The ryhmes were great! I almost cried! *sniff* I love the ending! THAT WAS "BLOODY BRILLIANT!" Just wishing for a night I can
Sleep without a worry or fret Makes me wonder if I'm a man Or just the Boy-They-Will-ForgetI LOVE IT! 10!
Author's Response: thank u so very very much! that just made my day!
wow, the rhymes fit together so well! good poem!
Author's Response: omg...i feel so happy!!!!!