Reviews For Blackout
Reviewer: HarrysGrl14
Date: 08/30/05 20:44
Chapter: Home is Where the Heart is

i was wondering if Ginny actually did die... it was an excellent story. you are so creative to think up all of that! you are amazing!

Author's Response: oh we couldn't kill of Ginny! what would harry do! :) thank you for your kind words they are very much appriciated, and thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Czarina
Date: 08/29/05 19:13
Chapter: Home is Where the Heart is

Excellent chapter! I really like your colorful writing style - everything is very vivid and the detail is perfect, very rich, but not overdone. The retrospective about James and Lily was interesting and gave a little more weight to their part of the story.

Author's Response: Thankyou for your review, it was very constructive and much appreciated.

Reviewer: Czarina
Date: 08/29/05 19:13
Chapter: Home is Where the Heart is

Excellent chapter! I really like your colorful writing style - everything is very vivid and the detail is perfect, very rich, but not overdone. The retrospective about James and Lily was interesting and gave a little more weight to their part of the story.

Reviewer: shortymac
Date: 08/23/05 23:46
Chapter: Home is Where the Heart is

Great chapter!

Author's Response: thanks! your reviews are appreciated and the next chapter should be up soon! :)

Author's Response: thanks! your reviews are appreciated and the next chapter should be up soon! :)

Reviewer: 9fawkes9
Date: 08/23/05 20:48
Chapter: Home is Where the Heart is

hey i REALLY love your story! it is so awesome and i can't wait until the next chapter. please please please try to hurry. this chapter didn't have a whole going on but it did explain a lot so we all understand it better. anyways i loved it. keep writing!!

Author's Response: The point of this chapter was really to explain a lot from previous "action-packed" chapters. Next chapter will be submitted as soon as the queue is reopened.

Reviewer: sweet7anonymous
Date: 08/22/05 23:53
Chapter: Home is Where the Heart is

oh it was so worth the wait. I truly enjoyed this chapter. I truly love the way this story is written. Keep up the great work. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thankyou for reading and your regular reviews, it means a lot.

Reviewer: ginny_potter
Date: 08/21/05 22:20
Chapter: Home is Where the Heart is

I am so happy you updated. :) I love the fact that you so closely link harry and ginny to james and lily. I know its always said that the potter men always choose redheads that look similar but you bought that into a more concrete way. I love your style of writting and am anxiously waiting for your next update :)

Author's Response: Thankyou very much, that was a really great review, I feel very proud :) I also love the "Potters and Redheads" bit. The last chapter will be up ASAP!

Reviewer: Scorpia
Date: 08/19/05 16:35
Chapter: This wall that stands between us

One thing, "Penny for your thoughts?" Ginny is a pure-blood who had no contact with the muggle world, she would say something more along the lines of, "Knut for your thoughts?" or sickle or galleon. Also, while Ron and Hermione bicker a lot, they don't normally fight in a life-or-death situation, but I know it was for the good of the story to seperate the couples. :)

Author's Response: That is a very good point about "Knut for your thoughts" might change that. And yes it was for the good of the story to separate the couples.

Reviewer: vanillasweety
Date: 06/24/05 10:25
Chapter: The Darkest Hour is Just Before Dawn

thats so sad poor harry poor ginny poor ron poor hermione i feel sorry for them all but harry is definantly lucky to have themas friends great chappie i can't wait till the next!!!!!!

Author's Response: hopefully the next chapter will be up really soon, i no we said that last time and it took ages but we are going to try and get it up really soon

Reviewer: Czarina
Date: 06/22/05 19:43
Chapter: The Darkest Hour is Just Before Dawn

Great chapter! I was hoping you'd update soon and I have to say the wait was worth it. I really enjoyed McGonagall in this chapter - it's always fun to see someone go head to head with Snape, but it's even better when it comes from McGonagall. I thought that the idea that Harry's love for Ginny can cause the protection from his mother to falter - it's a very interesting concept.

Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it. Thankyou for your review. However I just wanted to say that Ginny's love doesn't override his mother's. McGonagall was referring to the spell which used Ginny. I am sorry that it wasn't clear but hopefully the next chapter will clear it up.

Author's Response: Ok, I just read that and it didnt sound right. The spell being referred to is Pereda Venenum by Voldemort, which used Ginny

Reviewer: sweet7anonymous
Date: 06/21/05 23:06
Chapter: The Darkest Hour is Just Before Dawn

I truly love this story. It was totally worth the wait. You are truly a talented writer. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

Author's Response: That is really nice, thankyou. Your reviews make it all worth while (not that we dont love writing) We are gonna try and get chapter 6 up as soon as possible

Reviewer: CraftySlytherin
Date: 06/21/05 22:45
Chapter: The Darkest Hour is Just Before Dawn

YAYYYYY!!! I get to be the first to review!!! I have been waiting for an update on this story for AGES!!! I'm so glad you finally got the next chapter up, it was great! The song lyrics you put in were splendid, that song makes me tear up! I do hope Ginny will be okay, and it might have been nice to see Harry hex Snape into oblivion :)

Author's Response: I am sorry it's been so long, we've had exams and we re-did the whole chapter because 5 was going to be the last one but we decided to add the sequel to this one and make it one long story

Reviewer: Hormiga
Date: 06/19/05 17:46
Chapter: Blood spilt this night

I really enjoy it! please dont kill Ginny! jajajajaj well its really ur choise... Update soon

Author's Response: u will have to wait and see...

Reviewer: ginnyluvsharry90
Date: 05/16/05 18:39
Chapter: Blood spilt this night

awwwwwww so cute i dont like the spell though sooo sad it good very muvh actoin yay lol

Author's Response: Thanyou for reviewing! Sorry the next chapter is taking longer than expected :)

Reviewer: CraftySlytherin
Date: 05/11/05 0:59
Chapter: Blood spilt this night

This story is awesome and I will be adding it to my list of faves. When's the next chapter gonna be up??

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, and we consider it a major compliment that you would add us to your favs. we can't be sure when the next chapter will be up but we have planned for it to be the last....please keep reading and reviewing it means alot to us!

Reviewer: Huskers
Date: 05/02/05 11:10
Chapter: Blood spilt this night

That was an interesting twist on your story. I am wondering what happened to Ron and Hermione as the last time I checked they were facing off against Voldemort.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review, you wil find out exactly what happened to ron and hermione in teh next chapter but if you remember rightly thay were knocked unconcience by voldemort before he went to the screiking shack to kidnap ginny, don;t worry all will be explained soon, thank u for taking the time to give us feedback- we love it!

Reviewer: vanillasweety
Date: 05/01/05 10:59
Chapter: Blood spilt this night

nooo please write more please im saying please

Author's Response: thank u for reviewing we really appriciate them! If all goes according to plan the update shouldn't be as long this time but well.... we will just have to see. thanks for giving us some feedback and keep reading for the last chapter/s...

Reviewer: sweet7anonymous
Date: 05/01/05 0:30
Chapter: Blood spilt this night

wow that was an excellent chapter. It was worth the wait. Please updatae soon

Author's Response: Thanks for your review, they mean so much. Hopefully it wont be such a wait before ch5 is up :)

Reviewer: Czarina
Date: 04/30/05 20:33
Chapter: Blood spilt this night

Wow - I get to review first. This was an action filled chaper. My favorite was the incantation - it was really imaginative. Nice cliffy at the end and I certainly hope you update soon.

Author's Response: Hi, sorry it took so long people! We are so glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write an actionpacked chapter

Reviewer: ginnyluvsharry90
Date: 04/04/05 11:48
Chapter: Moonlight revelations and memories relived

wow that wuz sooooo great it makes me wanna write fan fics but i suck at them so ill resort to reading them anyways write soon plzzzz il be watting

Author's Response: Honestly, try writing! This is only our 1st submitted fanfic and it's so much better than I expected. If you need help ask a beta or work in a 2 like us. It's so much fun and worth the work. When it goes right you feel all creative and proud. I've only written a short one-shot by myself but I really enjoyed it. Just have a go

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