Reviews For Proud
Reviewer: doggstarr
Date: 03/15/05 14:43
Chapter: Proud

wow what a sensational one-shot. Hurray for you how true we are just ourselves but each of us has something to give. really well done.

Author's Response: Thank you. Everyone is different, but we are who we are and nothing can change that. May you be proud of who you are. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: fuzzyink
Date: 03/09/05 9:11
Chapter: Proud

First, a reviwer's note: I was searching something on the site and eventhough this fict wasn't what I was looking for, I got hooked on your summary. (You-know-why:)) Now, here comes my review: I liked the style you used to develop your character. Emotions are realistic. Moreover, you didn't spread the topic -- since it's very easy to loose yourself in DE things and war -- and stayed in the plot. Because I read some stories that are not really giving what they promissed in their summary. However, I think, things happen very quickly after the scream. Sentences are like in rush to arrive the conclusion -- Hufflepuff speech. But don't take that as very problem, since the person who writes these lines isn't very talented on writing English ;-D.

Author's Response: Thank you. I love the plot myself and thought that it was a little quick at the end, but it helps move the story along so I don't drag on. And bore you... Anyway, thank you so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Maggie
Date: 02/22/05 16:13
Chapter: Proud

I'm so proud of you...*wipes eyes* got a tissue anywhere? :-D

Author's Response: Yes, I do. Thank you for helping me. You are a great beta! Also, thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: School owl
Date: 02/21/05 21:48
Chapter: Proud

It's so touching. It's fantastic. It's something I wrote and am now reviewing...Have I sunken so low?

Author's Response: Yes, I have sunken so low because now, I'm responding to me about my work. Strange isn't it? Maybe you could help by reviewing...

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