I love how you put the different PoV in here. Keep up the good work! -ginnyaustin101
Keep writing!!!
Author's Response: I will I have crazy winter break, I'm going to london the whole time, but I'm wrting the sequel as fast as I can! :)
i really like your story!! your a gr8t writer!! post next chapie soon!!!
Author's Response: Aww... thanks! It's already in queue!
when will you update???? soon? plz!
Author's Response: I finally sent in my next chapter... it's been done since June but I couldn't log in.. all fixed now (I think) :)
awsome ^_^ the best can't for the next part.
Author's Response: thanks! Next chapter in Queue :)
*waits*
Author's Response: So sorry.... really!! But it might not be 2 or 3 weeks till my update, after the million projects and graduation! I'm sorry I might not have time till then. But I WILL finish this story, no matter how long it takes! Please keep reading despite the wait!!
Areu writing more? please tell us you are, it would be a shame to stop now. please continue
Author's Response: Yes, I am writing more. things have jest been so hectic, I'm graduating in a few weeks and i have 5 projects due next week... our formal was last night. I haven't had time to write. But no matter how long it takes (hopefully no much longer) I will finish because I hate it when people don't finish their stories. I'm glad to know people care though! I will update when I get the chance!! So sorry for the delay!!! :)
Lol the fight m kind of reminded me of the Jedi fight in the second star wars film. Dont ask how..cause i dont know myself...lol..Anyway..great fanfic..cant wait for the next one...
Author's Response: Thanks! Interesting comparison I have to say! lol :)
The different reviews aren't bad, but hearing the same dialogue 4 times gets kind of annoying. Maybe you could focus more on what each person is feeling about the situation then what exactly is being said. Good story though
Author's Response: Yeah, Istarted to realize that, and I'm wokring on it! Thanks! :)
oh, alrighty! Ill keep checking every morning and night!
are you still doing this story??
Author's Response: Ya, I'm sooooo sorry!!! I just got so busy with my exams, and both my aunt and uncle are getting married and I had to help plan a bridal shower and stuff!! Things just got soo hectic! I almost finished the next chapter and it should be submitted within the next week. Please forgive me for the wait!
Very good! However, you misspelled Lucius. It is Lucius, not Luscious.
Author's Response: ooo, sorry about that! Thanks for letting me know though... I'll fix it! Keep reading!! :)
I don't think very many people are big fans of grammer, so no sweat there... I can't wait for the next chapter now, though, because Voldie is coming! wonder what's gonna happen... Great job!
Author's Response: That's what I thought, and thanks!! Well, obviously I'm busy and I got to go, but another review makes me happier!! :)
wahoo! been waiting for the next chapter for forever! ^^ This time you did a better job of the diff. POVs, theyre all a little different. Still like just having Harry's and Lupin's POVs, but I'll live :) Great job, post the next chap. soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! As I said in my authors notes things have been hectic so a kind review is always good!
continue, I LOVE this story!
Author's Response: Ohhh, thanks sooo much!! Just for everyone information..... the next update might take a little while because I have some big tests going on.... But it will come, I just wanted to check my reviews!! Thanks Tia!! :)
Great chapter! I liked the last sentence. I like the different point of views, but that could be just me. I think it's interesting to know what the other people are doing and thinking at the same time. If I remember correctly (I read this chapter yesterday, didn't have time to review) there were just a few grammar mistakes, but those can be easily fixed. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks ladybug!! Your one of my biggest fans I think, and I enjoy writing different points of view. And, I think I left an A/N about the grammar. ALso, I wanted to incorporate the Maurauders somehow and the last line fit. So thanks for the review and keep reading. Much love, Stephie :)
Okay, you need to watch out for grammer and formatting. When someone has a line, you start a new paragraph. EX: You had- “We can fight him.” Ron whispered vengefully to Harry. “We can do this,” Harry reinforced, “It’s just Malfoy and his brainless cronies.” It was only then Harry realized how quiet the hall had gotten. Everyone, including most death eaters, were staring at the opposing forces. The crowed seemed more nervous and anxious then Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny. It's supposed to be- “We can fight him.” Ron whispered vengefully to Harry. “We can do this,” Harry reinforced, “It’s just Malfoy and his brainless cronies.” It was only then Harry realized how quiet the hall had gotten. Everyone, including most death eaters, were staring at the opposing forces. The crowed seemed more nervous and anxious then Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny. Silly me, I can't show you the proper way to format this. My sugesstion is to get a beta to look over your chapter before you send it in. Good luck.
Author's Response: Ya, you can't show that in a review... I'm working on getting a Beta, so hopefully, I'll have less grammer errors. And, hey criticism is better than no review right?? Thanks for reading!! :)
Once again, I wasnt all for the whole "different point of views" thing, and nothing much really happened in the chapter. Ill still be looking out for the next chapter, and I think you should tell about life after the war:)
Author's Response: Good! I wanted to go on after the war if i had support, though that won't be for a while! Thanks again!! :)
too many POV's in a row, it got boring. Malfoy's part was interesting, though. 10!
Author's Response: I was worried about that, I tried to change that a bit but it was tough. Hopefully you'll like the next chapter better, please keep reading!!! :)
I like the POVs because in battle everyone is seeing slightly different things and thinking different things. Its kinda like giving us a birds eye view. And i love how the Patronus formed one big crest. Its a great story and I look forward to the next chapters
Author's Response: Thanks sooo much!!! Hopefully, the next chapter will be up soon. Also, I liked the Patronus idea too (even though it was my idea) but it will be important later. Remeber I said, "it stayed in the back of the Hall." So, thanks again!! :)
