WOW! This story was amazing. The structre was brilliant and made the story come together very well. I had recently read a terrible fan fic and this story has put faith back in them for me :) THANK YOU!!!!
OMG!!This is fair sad i'm crying confused but crying
Somewhat comfusing, but it was good.
Wow, very well written! Easily one of the best stories on the site, although the going from past to future was a little bit confusing. It was very good, and I suggest a career in writing, if you don't already have one.
That was a really sweet story! At first, it was a little confusing, but then I started to piece it all together. WHOO!
Great Job on this Story! Your an amazing (did i say amazing, i ment AMAZING!!!) writer! Keep up this writing with your other stories!
-chrissy
Author's Response: hey! I want to say thank you for the wonderful review. I'm really glad you did enjoy this little story of mine. Just to let you know I rewrote the first chapter on another site. I just changed the letter because I thought this one was too meldramatic. If you're interested you can see it here. http://fanfiction.portkey.org/story/6360 if not, then don't worry about it man. Thanks again.
WOW, I was rivited. Thanks for a great piece of work. I was really worried for a moment thier that Harry was going to be Mr. Noble and let Herminone pass but he did the right thing and Gwen was very wise as well as loving. She was a very good character, lots could be learned from this piece. Thanks again.
Wow. Its beautiful. You have real and true talent.
Wow. Its beautiful. You have real and true talent.
OMgosh i absolutley adored it! Awesome job, btw I nominatd your story for the quicksilver awards, hope you win!
lol...i love how people do these weird ending things...like so..Fade Out. BUM BUM BUMMMM meh...i love these anyway
Thank You. I was so worried that Ron wasn't going to make it . Your writing was great and I hope to see more of your work.
I love this story. This is like my 3rd time reading it. Continue on writing!!!
I love this story. This is like my 3rd time reading it. Continue on writing!!!
I love this story. This is like my 3rd time reading it. Continue on writing!!!
Wow! That was wonderful! Please keep writing!
shoot, i read it again, this time i stayed up a bit later. this is such fricking good writing. this may well be the best fanfic i've read EVER!!! and i like that little "soundtrack" you made for the story. i would love to read more things from you
so yesterday i stayed up reading the so far ten chapters of torn. and i saw that you had another work, so i stayed up tonight to read it. i love your writing. it gives me that wierd feeling inside my neck when you get emotional.
