Reviews For Trying
Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 12/19/10 15:00
Chapter: Trying

this was sweet i liked it :)

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 12/19/10 15:00
Chapter: Trying

this was sweet i liked it :)

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 12/03/07 20:49
Chapter: Trying

i love it. simple and wonderful. its a cute story. you should write a story
about the last year when he gets her. keep up the great work!

Reviewer: LaylaEarth
Date: 06/11/07 8:43
Chapter: Trying

Great story!! I loved it, but a full-fledged fic would be good. Please check out my J/L fic and review!!!

Reviewer: lilyflower113
Date: 04/14/07 14:09
Chapter: Trying

GREAT! I do wish you would write more though

Reviewer: spazticapple
Date: 02/04/07 18:54
Chapter: Trying

i love the PoV! it's great! nice cliffhangerish ending, as well!

le Priya
~'Just Because' et 'Quit Haunting Me Will You?'

Reviewer: spazticapple
Date: 02/04/07 18:53
Chapter: Trying

i love the PoV! it's great! nice cliffhangerish ending, as well!

le Priya
~'Just Because' et 'Quit Hanuing Me Will You?'

Reviewer: California
Date: 01/28/07 17:24
Chapter: Trying

wow i luv this...all the details and everything. its great! keep on writing

Reviewer: goobersam9
Date: 06/30/06 15:40
Chapter: Trying


Reviewer: brokenhearted
Date: 06/13/06 22:10
Chapter: Trying

Oh my gosh! I beg of you from the bottom of my heart to write a sequel! If you already have, I'll read it, but this is a favorite. I thought it was really good.

Reviewer: fairiesandcream
Date: 11/18/05 3:00
Chapter: Trying

I agree with Hermione Clone7 and ColoursOfTheWind it would be so cool if you did sequels! I love James' attitude, it's so sweet! Really love your story! =)

Reviewer: ColorsOfTheWind
Date: 02/27/05 7:41
Chapter: Trying

i loved the ending. lol. i agree with Hermione Clone7, you should totally turn this into an actual fanfic instead of keeping it a one-shot. it seems like you're a really good writer and it would turn out to be a good lj story.

Reviewer: Hermione_Clone7
Date: 02/01/05 18:52
Chapter: Trying

Hey, that's pretty good. Why don't u make it into a full-fledged fic? That would be cool.

Reviewer: PotterChick958
Date: 11/22/04 0:20
Chapter: Trying

james is just so set in his love for lily, i love that! its so sweet to see that james will go to almost any extent for is love. good for him.

Reviewer: kranestad
Date: 11/10/04 15:37
Chapter: Trying

Great:) Very consistent and interesting seing how James does everything for her and won't give up-very in character if you ask me:) Write more with attempts of asking her out, it would be fun to see :) Great job!

Reviewer: Mfoutch
Date: 11/09/04 23:30
Chapter: Trying

I like it, its really good they way it is in james perspective, i donno, he seems perfect to me :0) but then again lily also seems like a good person, well i really like it so i hope you keep updating

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