happy holidays and happy deathly hallows day!
good story deffinitly a fav
What an new and orignal idea. Not to mention interesting. I loved the conversation between young Draco and Tonks. The characterization of young Draco was exactly how I imagined. Spoiled, yet, not completely turned to evil. That young innocence was described very well. I also enjoyed the conversation between Narcissa and Andromeda. Although a little rushed, it did set a mood between the two sisters. My favorite line: “We were always the daughters of Black. You forgot that. I didn’t.” What a wonderful line. You used great wording while describing Narcissa's emotional state after the encounter. Great job, keep writing. =)
Great story! I really love it! It's a reallydifferent scene. I think you've got them all in character.. especially Narcissa. I adored this quote:"We were always the daughters of Black. You forgot that. I didn’t.” That is SO like her.. Adding this to my favourites.. But isn't ZOnko's a joke shop? Why's it a sweet shop in this fic?
Makes sense, as all the pure-blood families are related. good job:-)
Author's Response: thanks for reading this~!