Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 12/22/06 10:34
Chapter: -the story-

happy holidays and happy deathly hallows day!

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 11/28/06 15:19
Chapter: -the story-

good story deffinitly a fav

Reviewer: kitkat2010
Date: 03/19/06 0:07
Chapter: -the story-

What an new and orignal idea. Not to mention interesting. I loved the conversation between young Draco and Tonks. The characterization of young Draco was exactly how I imagined. Spoiled, yet, not completely turned to evil. That young innocence was described very well. I also enjoyed the conversation between Narcissa and Andromeda. Although a little rushed, it did set a mood between the two sisters. My favorite line: “We were always the daughters of Black. You forgot that. I didn’t.” What a wonderful line. You used great wording while describing Narcissa's emotional state after the encounter. Great job, keep writing. =)

Reviewer: Blossomlily
Date: 02/15/06 4:23
Chapter: -the story-

Great story! I really love it! It's a reallydifferent scene. I think you've got them all in character.. especially Narcissa. I adored this quote:"We were always the daughters of Black. You forgot that. I didn’t.” That is SO like her.. Adding this to my favourites.. But isn't ZOnko's a joke shop? Why's it a sweet shop in this fic?

Reviewer: HermioneGranger
Date: 11/09/04 19:01
Chapter: -the story-

Makes sense, as all the pure-blood families are related. good job:-)

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