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Reviews For Ancient Magic

Name: hattiepotter (Signed) · Date: 12/27/05 5:38 · For: Destiny
Oh, and I forgot to say - loved the bit about once you give your heart to a reheaded witch she'll never give it back - so great.

Name: hattiepotter (Signed) · Date: 12/27/05 5:35 · For: Destiny
Ah man - don't you just love it when you finish a story? Writing and reading, of course. It was a really good story: it was nice to see something different in the way that you integrated Borgin's story into the H/G goodness! (lol) I'm really looking forward to reading the sequel, but first, I must finish typing my own sequel! I'm so almost there! Thanks for keeping my Christmas holidays un-dull with your writing, hattiepotter xxx

Name: hattiepotter (Signed) · Date: 12/26/05 11:41 · For: Ch 10 - Blood Ties
Wow another amazing chapter. Kept me very enthralled! I liked the ideas about the blood and stuff. I'll look forward to finding out more about the spell in the upcoming chapters! I liked "when did she get so little?" I understood how that must have felt for Harry - it was like she was suddenly something innocent he had to protect. Great! xx

Name: hattiepotter (Signed) · Date: 12/26/05 6:29 · For: Ch 9 - I'll Always Be Yours
Oo man - I love cliffhangers. I have been described as "queen of cliffhangers". Lol - they have to be done! Having said that, I'm glad I'm reading this now the story is finished! Another great chapter - onwards!

Author's Response: A queen of cliffhangers? What a title! Glad you liked this one!

Name: hattiepotter (Signed) · Date: 12/24/05 9:48 · For: Ch 8 - Honor
Great, as ever. I loved the whole Harry’s sense of honour thing. So funny! I'm getting a bit scared for H and G - what are the Malfoys planning?! Man. I will read the rest of this story shortly - it is keeping me very entertained over the Xmas hols! xxx

Author's Response: Yay - glad you're enjoying it over the holidays! And I've always imagined Harry as very honorable. It fits him.

Name: hattiepotter (Signed) · Date: 12/24/05 9:31 · For: Ch 7 - Late Night Revelations
Haha "H/G goodness" - you make me laugh. I loved this chapter - it's easy to get bored with all the explaining, but the story Borgin told was really interesting, believable and well written. On with the next chapter! Merry Christmas!

Author's Response: Transitional chapters are tough, for both reader and author. Thanks for hanging in there through it!

Name: hattiepotter (Signed) · Date: 12/22/05 6:51 · For: Ch 6 - Bonds
Aw I loved Ron hugging Ginny - it would usually be a little OOC but it fitted there. It's all getting very intriging! (I think I said that about the last chapter, as well...)

Author's Response: Well, they're growing up so I took the liberty of letting them hug. And I'm glad you think it's interesting - that keeps you reading!

Name: hattiepotter (Signed) · Date: 12/21/05 15:53 · For: Ch 5 - Love Spells
Aw that was cute! I love the way you compared Ginny to the Firebolt. I realise now that Ron does not know about them - that should be interesting...

Author's Response: Ginny is a redhead and a Weasley, after all. :)

Name: hattiepotter (Signed) · Date: 12/20/05 13:45 · For: Ch 4 - Hope, Love and Late Night Misunderstandings
Oooo so he's on a par with Malfoy?! How intriging. I'm still really loving this story. One thing I did notice though was the fact that "certain NEWT level classes consisted of a combination of members from different houses" - classes are usually mixed-house. But that's a small point! Does Ron know about Harry and Ginny? I didn't totally get whether he did or not. Maybe I'm being stupid! (wouldn't be the first time) Looking forward to reading more. hattiepotter xxx

Author's Response: Ah - excellent point. Can't do much about it now, but I'll keep that in mind for next time. Ron doesn't know yet. Read on...

Name: hattiepotter (Signed) · Date: 12/17/05 12:14 · For: Ch 3 - Transfiguration
OMG I loved the way that Ginny teased Harry. Poor love - didn't know what had hit him! I like the way you described Percy, and I'm very interested in what Malfoy's up to. I think I know who the DADA teacher will be. I loved Ginny's: "We did it! Well, not IT, but it." That was so funny! I shall keep reading shortly! xxx

Author's Response: No, Harry didn't know what hit him. :) Might have been better that way...

Name: hattiepotter (Signed) · Date: 12/16/05 12:22 · For: Ch 2 - Written in The Stars
Hermione's little chat was really funny! I LOVE this story. It's so great how you include these little interludes - it's not just Harry and Ginny. I can tell that they are going to become mysteries of their own, and I can't wait to find out what! Harry and Ginny were really sweet - I liked how realistic it was when they were star-gazing: they didn't just lie there and feel all nice and then kiss - Harry's thoughts were actually understandably real. I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you! It's always nice to know it sounds real to more than just me!

Name: hattiepotter (Signed) · Date: 12/14/05 13:45 · For: Ch 1 - Magical Ingredients
I really like this story - you've included just the right amount of humour, fluff, mystery and angst to make it interesting. The whole inky snowballs thing made me laugh outloud several times, and I though Mrs Weasley's reaction was really sweet. Tomorrow - next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the inky snowballs - I admit that making up pranks is not my strong point. I walk way too narrow of a line in real life to be all that creative when it comes to mischief! :)

Name: hattiepotter (Signed) · Date: 12/14/05 12:51 · For: Prologue
I liked this start. It made a change from what you'd normally expect. Is this post-OotP or HBP or what? I'm looking forward to reading on!

Author's Response: Ancient Magic and Blood of the Heart are both post-OotP, although, as Blood of the Heart has progressed, I've been able to incorporate a few of the canon bits from HBP. Glad you enjoyed the start!

Name: several_sunlit_days (Signed) · Date: 12/13/05 20:22 · For: Destiny
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful story!!!!!! i love it! its definatlely going on my favorites!!!! loved the snog scenes, teh tender moments, and you plot was amazing! i could never think up a plot like that! great job!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! What a wonderful compliment, to be added to a Favorites list. Glad you enjoyed it!

Name: EmeraldFire (Signed) · Date: 12/04/05 4:54 · For: Destiny
Absolutely brilliant story, great to have Ginny not let Harry close up again! Good one :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: Sirius34 (Signed) · Date: 09/01/05 13:25 · For: Destiny
Wow great fic. I love that Ginny wouldn't just let him close himself off from her. I can't wait to read the sequal

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy the sequel, too!

Name: JimboCOUS (Anonymous) · Date: 08/28/05 1:16 · For: Destiny
Hi, I just realized I've read this a couple times but never reviewed. Both this and the sequel are really well done. Thanks for a great read!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: the_dwc (Signed) · Date: 08/05/05 0:47 · For: Destiny
This was one of the better stories on here! I certainly liked it thats for sure! I don't get why all the good stories are more towards the back of the site?

Author's Response: I have no idea! I'm glad you found it though and liked it. It was my first attempt at something longer than a one shot. Thanks for spending some time reading it!

Name: DeerKillerBeemer (Signed) · Date: 07/23/05 18:15 · For: Ch 2 - Written in The Stars
I love this story! Even though the chapters seem to be a bit short, you write well enough to pull it off. Great story--I'm a total H/G shipper, and your fic has the perfect flow to it. Perfect 10!

Author's Response: LOL - my beta on Blood of the Heart told me the same thing - my chapters were too short! Blame it on my first chapter fiction - I didn't know I could write more. Ah well! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Name: WeasleyDragon (Signed) · Date: 06/15/05 19:52 · For: Prologue
This story was awesome. one of the best written in the fan fiction. i loved how you were able to make it seem like a novel. the strange thing is i feel like i'm reading an actual harry potter book thats how good i think it is. Also, you explanation of the ancient magic somehow helped me understand the love protection thing that was placed on harry when his mom died. You are awesome writer. Hopefully when i start writin fan fics it'll be as good as yours.

Author's Response: Wow - that is high praise indeed! Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you enjoy it!

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