way cute, i liked it a lot, good job
Oh Beautiful!!! Nice and short and sweet and deep!
One word for you......Perfect!
What a prettiful story! I hate reading romance ones coz i think that sometimes they can ruin a great story, like ginny and draco - things that shouldn't happen. But this, however, was meant to happen and i think that the poems were beautiful. I have read a lot of Lily and James and so far yours is the best. well done. :)
wow, those were great poems, you're a really good writer!
cute is all i can say
hmmmm *raises an eyebrow* ok I admit defeat I was a little sceptical about reading this-- I love 10 things I hate about you especially Kat's poem so I was worried you were going to sabotage it-- but it was good. I'm not quite sure about James' poem although it rhymed beautifully it's just I know how the poem is supposed to be read and James' version didn't fit it that well. Lily's on the other hand was just perfect. I'll definitely try to check out your other stuff! Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks, i'm glad you read even though you were skeptical. I'm not sure i understood you, but james' wasn't really supposed to be like kat's, only lily's was. But thanks for reading and reviewing!
Oh, so cute! Lusems, ~Ella.
Absolutely wonderful! That was sooo cute and soooo touching, it brought tears to my eyes! 10!!!!
awwww thats so sweet! I love story's like this.
aw, that was so sweet. you wrote two very cute poems that said it all. great job.
i love your story! and your poetry, its a great idea about lily and james, pity it's only a one-shot you could go so much furthur
Very sweet! The poetry was well done!
Very sweet! Good job!
awww that is so totally SWEET! you're a good poet, too. better than I am! lol
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! that was so sweet! i could totally picture lames and lily writing poems like that. simply beautiful. keep writing, you have a real talent for romance fics, one shot or not.
that was beautiful!!!!!! i cried!!!! and 10 things i hate about you is the best movie! that was a great one-shot!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!
So sweet..adding it to my favs so I can read it when ever I am sad...lol great job...now I am off to your other fics...