Reviewer: ginnypotter04
Date: 02/15/05 21:32
Chapter: one-shot

way cute, i liked it a lot, good job

Reviewer: loligo8me
Date: 02/14/05 23:17
Chapter: one-shot

Oh Beautiful!!! Nice and short and sweet and deep!

Reviewer: Aidayla
Date: 02/14/05 0:19
Chapter: one-shot

One word for you......Perfect!

Reviewer: Kailyn
Date: 02/13/05 0:12
Chapter: one-shot

What a prettiful story! I hate reading romance ones coz i think that sometimes they can ruin a great story, like ginny and draco - things that shouldn't happen. But this, however, was meant to happen and i think that the poems were beautiful. I have read a lot of Lily and James and so far yours is the best. well done. :)

Reviewer: Siri_luver
Date: 02/12/05 17:53
Chapter: one-shot

wow, those were great poems, you're a really good writer!

Reviewer: hippogriff9494
Date: 02/11/05 20:31
Chapter: one-shot

cute is all i can say

Reviewer: Raven_Stag
Date: 02/11/05 18:13
Chapter: one-shot

Awesome story!

Reviewer: stickm
Date: 02/11/05 15:37
Chapter: one-shot

hmmmm *raises an eyebrow* ok I admit defeat I was a little sceptical about reading this-- I love 10 things I hate about you especially Kat's poem so I was worried you were going to sabotage it-- but it was good. I'm not quite sure about James' poem although it rhymed beautifully it's just I know how the poem is supposed to be read and James' version didn't fit it that well. Lily's on the other hand was just perfect. I'll definitely try to check out your other stuff! Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks, i'm glad you read even though you were skeptical. I'm not sure i understood you, but james' wasn't really supposed to be like kat's, only lily's was. But thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Ella Norman
Date: 02/11/05 15:02
Chapter: one-shot

Oh, so cute! Lusems, ~Ella.

Reviewer: Merianna
Date: 02/11/05 13:46
Chapter: one-shot

Absolutely wonderful! That was sooo cute and soooo touching, it brought tears to my eyes! 10!!!!

Reviewer: Seer
Date: 02/11/05 12:40
Chapter: one-shot

awwww thats so sweet! I love story's like this.

Reviewer: Secret Lily
Date: 02/11/05 12:20
Chapter: one-shot

aw, that was so sweet. you wrote two very cute poems that said it all. great job.

Reviewer: Flame girl
Date: 02/11/05 11:51
Chapter: one-shot

i love your story! and your poetry, its a great idea about lily and james, pity it's only a one-shot you could go so much furthur

Reviewer: Hermione_Clone7
Date: 02/11/05 8:23
Chapter: one-shot


Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 02/11/05 8:21
Chapter: one-shot

Very sweet! The poetry was well done!

Reviewer: OhISee
Date: 02/11/05 7:40
Chapter: one-shot

Very sweet! Good job!

Reviewer: ColorsOfTheWind
Date: 02/11/05 5:21
Chapter: one-shot

awww that is so totally SWEET! you're a good poet, too. better than I am! lol

Reviewer: PotterChick958
Date: 02/11/05 0:16
Chapter: one-shot

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! that was so sweet! i could totally picture lames and lily writing poems like that. simply beautiful. keep writing, you have a real talent for romance fics, one shot or not.

Reviewer: amrawo
Date: 02/10/05 22:49
Chapter: one-shot

that was beautiful!!!!!! i cried!!!! and 10 things i hate about you is the best movie! that was a great one-shot!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Mfoutch
Date: 02/10/05 22:06
Chapter: one-shot

So sweet..adding it to my favs so I can read it when ever I am great I am off to your other fics...

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