This almost made me cry! Very cute
This is great! Thank you for taking the time to write those awesome poems and make actual good fics! Now I will go read your other fics!
those are realllllllyyy goood poems!
This was a cute one-shot. Good poetry too. I really enjoyed this sweet little "get-away" from the typical style of Lily and James. great job! Now I'm going to go to your other stories... =)
Hey, pretty good story, those poems were good too. Not 100%, but still good. You could tell you took your time and that you worked on the rhythm. That was such a good movie, eh? (*chuckles to herself at use of "eh" lol) I likes this story!! I could handle it staying a one-shot
I hate this Stupid story It stinks like poo If u asked me to read it again. I'd say STUFF YOU
let me clarify if something is perfect then in all actuality it isnt.... anywa wat I am trying to say is GREAT poetry, I should know I love that kind of stuff, and write that stuff and think about rhymes when Im not thinking about it...any way no I am NOT insane
very good I wouldnt have changed the words at all... okay I would have changed the word order but hey im not perfect
absoulutly LOVED THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was so nice and cut and...AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!write more lke these!!!!!!!!!
Very cute. Didn't like the movie all too much, but this is very good. Thanks for the read.
Aww ... it's so cute
sweet but simple. amazing. loved it all.
i absolutly loved it. it was amazing.
That was so sweet! Your poems were really cool! I think I've read another of your one shots but I'm not sure, I might click on your name after this and see. Anyway, great story!
that was really good...i love the poems...very imaginative...really love it!!
i luv the poems. L.E.
Ha i love that movie too. Great fic
awwwwww, theres no other word for it great poems, and that is definently a compliment from me for i hate poetry, most likely cause i am a lost cause for writing but that is besides the point this was a great fic
Probably the sweetest story i've read.
This was so beautifully pretty!! Aah.