Reviewer: mairal
Date: 12/04/10 5:51
Chapter: one-shot

great rhymes great poem

awsome!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: munlight_12
Date: 10/06/08 9:12
Chapter: one-shot

AMAZING!!!!!!!

I absolutely love it. It is really well written and I hope u write many more stories like this.

Love
Mun

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 06/09/08 21:32
Chapter: one-shot

Excellent, I love the poems, who knew they were both so gifted? The first one in particular could be about anyone, if you changed the name of course. And it was so sweet when he found her asleep like that. Aww, you just make me feel so...

Reviewer: Lynseypinsey
Date: 03/10/08 14:01
Chapter: one-shot

that was so adorable! love it! :D

Reviewer: coughtpotter x x x
Date: 01/08/08 13:56
Chapter: one-shot

GREAT OR IN IRISH MAITH THU

Reviewer: Dissendio
Date: 11/18/07 13:25
Chapter: one-shot

Sweet. Really sweet. I love this one-shot. I think that there is a strong possibility that something like this did happen. By the way, you are VERY good poetry. Absolutly fantastic!

Reviewer: Lilykat
Date: 09/22/07 21:49
Chapter: one-shot

O....K....

Reviewer: shanekarox
Date: 08/30/07 18:00
Chapter: one-shot

That was really good.....nice poems!!! :)

Reviewer: CookieMonsterLovee
Date: 08/26/07 5:34
Chapter: one-shot

So sweet, your really good at writing poems :]

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 08/25/07 1:48
Chapter: one-shot

Thank You So Much
You Have Helped Us Out Of Hole We Dug Ourselves In Without Daddy But You Made Us Smile Thank You

Love
Leah, Abby, Sophie, Emma, Claire, & Ella.

P.S.
Sophia Emma Claire, and Ella cant reid but me and Abby can and we read to them they laugh and smile alot witch if i say is very hard to do now so thanks as the big sister i try to make them happy but i cant but you can

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 08/22/07 12:04
Chapter: one-shot

This is great stuff!! I always love your stories. You never disappoint me! 10/10!

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 08/12/07 18:23
Chapter: one-shot

OH MY GOD! Why can't stuff like that happen in realy life and why can't i write like that!! This is such an amazing poem/story thing i ever read and cried about! =)

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 08/02/07 12:23
Chapter: one-shot

That was very nice. Well done.

Reviewer: lillylover77
Date: 07/15/07 12:03
Chapter: one-shot

oh my gosh! Its so sweet I love it!!

Reviewer: lillylover77
Date: 07/15/07 12:03
Chapter: one-shot

oh my gosh! Its so sweet I love it!!

Reviewer: lillylover77
Date: 07/15/07 12:03
Chapter: one-shot

oh my gosh! Its so sweet I love it!!

Reviewer: loonylongbottom
Date: 07/04/07 17:17
Chapter: one-shot

awwwwah!! :D

Reviewer: arnold the pygmypuff
Date: 06/06/07 19:41
Chapter: one-shot

Wow. I think this is by far the best two poems I have read. I personally tried to do something that involved Kat's 10 things I hate about you poem, but it failed. Yours, however, certainly didn't. It was great- keep writing!

Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 06/06/07 15:22
Chapter: one-shot

AAAAWWWWW!!! That story was so cute!! I thought I would be like James trying to hit on Lily with some poems, but (as you can see) I was wrong. It was a very nice twist to the ending of my prediction. Like, before I read Lily's poem, I obviously thought it kinda weird that they would kiss. I was all "OMG! Like, doesn't Lily, like, hate him??"
Once again... I LUVD IT!! -Lily (I luv fics that have my name in it!!)

Reviewer: cto10121
Date: 05/08/07 19:46
Chapter: one-shot

Wionderfully clever with the poems! They are very good. Have you ever thought about entering a poetry contest or something?

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