Reviewer: jamlil
Date: 09/04/09 9:32
Chapter: Utter Melee

oh. i realy like it. i hope you update soon. and don't give up.

Reviewer: LilyJamesPotter
Date: 09/03/09 5:44
Chapter: Utter Melee

You reallyyyyy shouldn't stop writing.!!

Everytime i got an email from MNFF saying that one of my favorites has been updated.. i ALWAYS hope its this one.. but it wasn't so for a long time. Now that you have started writing again i REALLY can;t stand to see it get abandoned. you have to finish it.. or better keep writing don't kill james and lily... :(

And this chapter was AWESOME!!! The battle was very well written and the small bit at the end was different. It was dark and something thats new in this story

Keep writing!

Reviewer: applecrumble
Date: 09/01/09 5:00
Chapter: Utter Melee

You have got to keep writing! Pleeeeeaaaaaaase!! I've been hiding my laptop under my pillow so I could read your story when I should be asleep. I only registered just now so I could beg for you to continue writing this!

Reviewer: Tallguy
Date: 08/31/09 20:03
Chapter: Utter Melee

Excellant story, I recently joined and discovered this quickly. Please continue.

Reviewer: in love with harry
Date: 08/31/09 10:45
Chapter: Utter Melee

omg yo ucant leave us hanging i might have to cry you need to finish this becos i kno many readers love this story

Reviewer: alyssa_S
Date: 08/31/09 2:48
Chapter: Utter Melee

noooooooo.... don't stop. i love this story and wait for the email to come through to let me know that it's updated!!!
how could you do that??? please keep writting!
from a devoted fan

Reviewer: ILoveHarry 3_14
Date: 08/30/09 21:17
Chapter: Utter Melee

Please keep updating. It's a really great story. Keep writing and I will keep reading.

Reviewer: samspectacular
Date: 08/30/09 20:19
Chapter: Utter Melee

no no no you have to keep writing!!!!!!! I absolutely love your story! It is the best James/Lilly story I have read. I don't think I could stand it if you didn't continue writing.I read the whole story in like an hour because I couldn't stop reading.

Sometimes it seems like your chanelling JKR cause it sounds close to the way she writes. I love it and I will probably cry if you stop!!!!!!

Reviewer: TheManagement
Date: 08/30/09 17:58
Chapter: Utter Melee


Reviewer: Phlightless_phoenix_28
Date: 08/30/09 16:42
Chapter: Utter Melee

Please please please please please please continue! At least for a bit, it's a wonderful story!!!! J/L are my favorites, and this is one of the best! Maybe end at their first kiss? As much as you feel, but please at least a chapter more! It would be much appreciated!

Reviewer: gryffindor_chica13
Date: 08/30/09 16:38
Chapter: Utter Melee

Please keep writing this! I really like this fic.

Reviewer: snapeisevil67
Date: 08/30/09 16:37
Chapter: Utter Melee

WAIT!!!! YOU CAN'T STOP NOW!!! I'm still reading this story. I read the first 50 chapters in one morning because I couldn't bring myself to stop.

Reviewer: chrissyanddracoforever
Date: 08/30/09 13:34
Chapter: Utter Melee

OMG keep it up i love this storry to much

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone
Date: 08/30/09 13:24
Chapter: Utter Melee

I haven't signed into this account for god knows how long, but I've been loyally reading this story since the very beginning.

Every time I get an email saying one of my favourites has been updated on MNFF, my heart genuinely does a jig in my throat, because I always hope it's this story. I honestly absolutely love it and I think it'd be a complete waste if you didn't continue because it's so fantastic.

It's funny, it's clever, it's extremely well-written, your characterisations of James and Lily and everyone are fantastic and intriguing to read and, at times, I'm fooled into thinking this was written by JKR and I end up getting confused about what we actually know happened to James and Lily and what you've written!

When I came back to MNFF for the first time in years, it was because I'd received an email saying this story had been updated. I re-read it all and it inspired me to read the HP series again - so thank you for that.

I really, really, REALLY hope you continue writing this, because I will miss it a lot if it stops. I know what happens to James and Lily in the end, but I still want to find out what happens in between - written by you.

The last few paragraphs in this chapter completely wrenched my heartstrings and it'd be a real disappointment if you ended their and your story here.

Reviewer: mon18
Date: 08/30/09 11:54
Chapter: Utter Melee

awesome! loved the fight scene, it wasn't too drawn out but it wasn't too short either. I'm glad you've started writing again, i can honestly say ive missed reading this story. Can't wait to read wat happens next!

Reviewer: Aria_Aurora1
Date: 08/30/09 11:45
Chapter: Utter Melee

Don't stop writing now! This story is so good!!!!!
You HAVE to see them go into their 7th year, and you HAVE to see them get together!!!!

Reviewer: I-LUV-SIRIUS
Date: 08/30/09 10:57
Chapter: Re-Introductions

Don't stop!!!!!!!!!

Keep going with the story and finish it properly please!!! It's rerally great and you're an amazing writer!!! You have to go as far as them finishing at Hogwarts!!


Reviewer: Davidoduck
Date: 08/30/09 10:22
Chapter: A Christmas Eve Dance

Well i dont want you to stop, plz carry on :)

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 08/30/09 9:24
Chapter: Utter Melee

well my dear, you certainly do have a talent for writing, and its soo good right now, if you wanna end it do it in like 3 more chapters with them getting together i suppose that'd be the best way to end it if you want to, and if you need ideas i could run around my mind and get you some =)

Reviewer: harryobsessed19
Date: 08/30/09 9:13
Chapter: Utter Melee

no no no no definately keep going!!!!

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