Reviewer: Luna Thomas
Date: 03/03/10 20:32
Chapter: In the Forest


Reviewer: Luna Thomas
Date: 03/03/10 20:29
Chapter: Fighting Over Dates

Well we new james would be jealous

Reviewer: Luna Thomas
Date: 03/03/10 20:26
Chapter: Lily's Date


Reviewer: Luna Thomas
Date: 03/03/10 20:24
Chapter: Personal Protection


Reviewer: Luna Thomas
Date: 03/03/10 20:21
Chapter: Redemption


Reviewer: Luna Thomas
Date: 03/03/10 20:18
Chapter: In the Hospital Wing


Reviewer: Luna Thomas
Date: 03/03/10 20:13
Chapter: Discovery

duhduhdahdah James to the rescue

Reviewer: Luna Thomas
Date: 03/03/10 20:11
Chapter: It Happens

dumbledore s not going to be happy is he

Reviewer: Luna Thomas
Date: 03/03/10 20:08
Chapter: Rude Awakenings

wow amazing you should publish lol

Reviewer: Luna Thomas
Date: 03/03/10 19:59
Chapter: Friends In Flour

good foodfight. very romantic

Reviewer: Luna Thomas
Date: 03/03/10 19:48
Chapter: Sorrow

wow imagine wow her whole family that makes sence since harrys only remaining relative was petuina

Reviewer: Luna Thomas
Date: 03/03/10 18:49
Chapter: Forgive Me?

esit im confused does lupin like lilly??

Reviewer: Luna Thomas
Date: 03/03/10 18:22
Chapter: Threats

snape should be nicer to lilly if he loves her

Reviewer: Luna Thomas
Date: 03/03/10 18:16
Chapter: Re-Introductions

I like how we already know they'll end up together and its your job to tell us so far pretty good!

Reviewer: sillysoraya
Date: 02/03/10 18:18
Chapter: A Thankful Return

Also, the last line, "Did someone say Potter?" reminded me so much of the character of Malfoy from A Very Potter Musical (you must have seen it? If not, search it on youtube; it rocks so hard!) :)

I really hope more people leave you reviews, as I'd hate for you to think no one cares about this story, when I expect people are simply used to reading and keeping their thoughts to themselves- I know I usually do.

Reviewer: samspectacular
Date: 01/10/10 22:20
Chapter: A Thankful Return

i absolutely love love love love love this story.When I saw there was a new chapter up I flipped out so I desided to reread the wholething. As I got to chapter 10 I gotcalled away and when I came back the like I had and mugglenet wouldnt work for me...I spazzed for like days and I checked my computer like every half hour. Tonight when I checked it came on and I started screaming I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU!!!!!! My entire family looked at me likeI was crazy.

You have to keep writing. I read alot of stories on here and so far yours is the most plausible and fun to raed. I've always wished that jk rowling would write abook on the marauders and your story comes really really close to what I'd imagine something she would write.

All the characters act the way they are supposed to and one of my favorite parts is still when Sirius was going aroundto the portrits and what he said about dressing more provocatively to the late Mrs. Potter. Sirius is probably my all over favorite character, but I more enjoy reading about the interactions between James and Lilly.

So please please please keep writing and update soon.

ps. I dont think you should change the title I like it. It's oneof the things that cased me first to take notice and read it.

Reviewer: ILoveHarry 3_14
Date: 01/03/10 18:48
Chapter: A Thankful Return

I like the title, you can change it if you want. Thanks for updating. I always read when I see you have updated. Please update when you can; I'm still enjoying your story.

Reviewer: sillysoraya
Date: 01/03/10 12:09
Chapter: A Thankful Return

Ah, I'd almost forgotten about this story! I read the last 5 or so chapters to get my head back into the plot :) I'm glad you're working on it again, as I remember this to be an old favourite of mine and it would be a shame for such an evidently well-thought-out story to never finish... So good luck and keep at it! =D I like that Peter gets some action in this story- so many seem to just ignore him completely, and although he's an ass, he is a marauder :)

Reviewer: Griffindorgirl05
Date: 12/03/09 16:22
Chapter: Of Portraits and Pleasing Presents

haha, love Sirius' reaction at the end of the chapter. This story is sooo good. Please update soon, don't stop writing it!!

Reviewer: I-luv-Hogwarts
Date: 10/12/09 7:54
Chapter: Of Portraits and Pleasing Presents

I am so sorry that I haven't rewiewed sooner.
I LOVE this story!
Since I haven't answered them before I will answer a few of the questions you already asked.
My favorite characters/couple is Alex and Sirius.
A few of my favorite chapter headings are: Things that go BUMP in the night, To make a redhead see red, and friends in flour.
I thought you might have had a little more of the fight with the Death Eaters at Alex's house, but it worked.
I also really like the ending of chapter 53!!!
And last, but definately not least...

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