Reviewer: Erised1433
Date: 04/05/12 2:17
Chapter: Re-Introductions

This is great! I say "is" as I hope there will be more. If not, thanks for writing a great story!

Reviewer: Maddie Potter
Date: 03/12/12 5:55
Chapter: A Thankful Return

I really like this story, especially the parts that make me laugh like "What are you doing on the floor?".

Reviewer: Azkaban guard
Date: 01/22/12 14:10
Chapter: Re-Introductions

so amazing! loved every single chapter of this story. keep writing coz you have a serious talent! :)

Reviewer: caspercaribou
Date: 12/19/11 19:31
Chapter: Alas, the End

Loved it! Wish you had kept going.

Reviewer: Lily_Jean_Weasley95
Date: 10/24/11 23:30
Chapter: Alas, the End

Wow. This has to be one of the greatest Lily/James stories I've ever read, and most definitely the longest. I loved ever minute of it. You really did a fantastic job with the Characters. The Marauders are my favorite, so I've really done all I can to learn about them, and you did a great job with them. I wish it could keep going, but you ended it so well, I won't beg for that last mega-chapter. Pure Brilliance. :)

Reviewer: Sirius_Lily_James
Date: 10/15/11 19:43
Chapter: Alas, the End

This story was so cute! My favourite part was the very end. Also, really good title. That's what caught my eye into reading it. You should definitly write more! :)

Reviewer: LightningBlast_99
Date: 10/04/11 19:27
Chapter: Alas, the End

I loved it of course but i get the feeling that you were just trying to get over with it in the last chapter..Not that i mind of course cuz ive never been one for patience

Author's Response: The point of the last two chapters wasn't really to write a story. I realized that I would never finish it that way. Instead, I took my outline and made it into readable story snippets for you guys :)

Reviewer: Kaitlyn Snape
Date: 09/27/11 20:11
Chapter: Alas, the End

LOVE IT!!!! And it's the perfect proposal!!!!! Also, I would definitely LOVE a couple more chapters. Awesome story, though, if you don't add anything.

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 09/27/11 18:04
Chapter: Alas, the End

No I'm soo sad its done! Please come back and write another mega chapter!!!!! :) thanks for sticking through it!

Reviewer: Kaitlyn Snape
Date: 09/26/11 20:16
Chapter: So Close and Yet So Far

Such an amazing story. I can't wait to hear the remaining chapters!

Reviewer: Kaitlyn Snape
Date: 09/23/11 14:13
Chapter: So Close and Yet So Far

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: Dobbysocks796
Date: 09/17/11 12:21
Chapter: So Close and Yet So Far

Please finish! This is delightful! :)

Reviewer: morthathe wizard
Date: 09/17/11 11:19
Chapter: A Thankful Return

what dos potter do to snape please tell all

Reviewer: ginnys_little_sister
Date: 09/17/11 6:28
Chapter: So Close and Yet So Far

I've been waiting until I finished reading to say this!
1. I'm really enjoying it! Can't wait for more!!!
2. Wasn't slughorn potions professor? And Millis(I can't remember the name) DADA??
3. Wasn't it Avery and Bellatrix who attacked Lily?

Again, I'm really looking forward to what comes next!
I'm loving it!

Author's Response: yes, you are right. after the newest books came out, I would go back and try to shift things to make them more canon.... I guess I didn't change everything!

Reviewer: muggle13
Date: 09/03/11 14:51
Chapter: A Thankful Return

this story is amazing!!! i love it so much

Reviewer: muggle13
Date: 09/03/11 14:51
Chapter: A Thankful Return

this story is amazing!!! i love it so much

Reviewer: muggle13
Date: 09/03/11 14:51
Chapter: A Thankful Return

this story is amazing!!! i love it so much

Reviewer: longbottom11
Date: 08/31/11 12:32
Chapter: A Thankful Return

I really like the story. the way youve wrtten it is amazing. Ilove the cliff hangers ad the way youve incorpurated some of the book. Over all the best fan fiction i have read!!

Reviewer: longbottom11
Date: 08/31/11 12:20
Chapter: Utter Melee


Reviewer: fairy_lights27
Date: 08/30/11 18:31
Chapter: Re-Introductions

You updated. :D
Awesome story, loveitloveitloveit.

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