This is great! I say "is" as I hope there will be more. If not, thanks for writing a great story!
I really like this story, especially the parts that make me laugh like "What are you doing on the floor?".
so amazing! loved every single chapter of this story. keep writing coz you have a serious talent! :)
Loved it! Wish you had kept going.
Wow. This has to be one of the greatest Lily/James stories I've ever read, and most definitely the longest. I loved ever minute of it. You really did a fantastic job with the Characters. The Marauders are my favorite, so I've really done all I can to learn about them, and you did a great job with them. I wish it could keep going, but you ended it so well, I won't beg for that last mega-chapter. Pure Brilliance. :)
This story was so cute! My favourite part was the very end. Also, really good title. That's what caught my eye into reading it. You should definitly write more! :)
I loved it of course but i get the feeling that you were just trying to get over with it in the last chapter..Not that i mind of course cuz ive never been one for patience
Author's Response: The point of the last two chapters wasn't really to write a story. I realized that I would never finish it that way. Instead, I took my outline and made it into readable story snippets for you guys :)
LOVE IT!!!! And it's the perfect proposal!!!!! Also, I would definitely LOVE a couple more chapters. Awesome story, though, if you don't add anything.
No I'm soo sad its done! Please come back and write another mega chapter!!!!! :) thanks for sticking through it!
Such an amazing story. I can't wait to hear the remaining chapters!
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Please finish! This is delightful! :)
what dos potter do to snape please tell all
I've been waiting until I finished reading to say this!
1. I'm really enjoying it! Can't wait for more!!!
2. Wasn't slughorn potions professor? And Millis(I can't remember the name) DADA??
3. Wasn't it Avery and Bellatrix who attacked Lily?
Again, I'm really looking forward to what comes next!
I'm loving it!
Author's Response: yes, you are right. after the newest books came out, I would go back and try to shift things to make them more canon.... I guess I didn't change everything!
this story is amazing!!! i love it so much
this story is amazing!!! i love it so much
this story is amazing!!! i love it so much
I really like the story. the way youve wrtten it is amazing. Ilove the cliff hangers ad the way youve incorpurated some of the book. Over all the best fan fiction i have read!!
KEEP WRITING!!!!! THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!
WHOOOOOOOO!
You updated. :D
Awesome story, loveitloveitloveit.