I really enjoyed this story. I thought it was very sweet and I could totally see Ron doing something like that. But I noticed that in the story the kids went to class on saturday and Sunday. I just wanted to point that out because it is a very good story
good but i think the marriage bit ruins it.
That was good! um, I like the whole seceret admier thing!
Your right who hasn't had a dream of a land full of chocolets. Oh and the fan fic was very well written
I think that the first chapter was well writtnen. I also love Ron/Hemione fan fics to. Good Job
I REALLY liked liked the whole thing! You guys did a great job!
Mmm, this story is okay. It's not very well written, but it's ooooookay. Good job, I guess.
oh my goodness that was the greatest love story i have ever read!!! it was sappy, but not too sappy, sweet, but just sweet enough. and the writing itself was fantastic, i couldn't even tell when it was vicky writing, or nicky. wow, i can't even put it into words how good that was!
Ohhh, I love this fic!
So cute!
I envy Hermione, lol.
Ohhh, I love this fic!
So cute!
I envy Hermione, lol.
A bit obvious that it was Ron, but still...I did like it. I started cracking up so hard when I read the bit about the ferret (I know it was in the previous chapter, but I like to review the entire story as a whole). Great job! ^-^
It was really good. The only thing was that the two different authors writing it - the stories didn't quite match. In one it says that they were in sixth year and the other said that they were in seventh. One said Valentines day was on a Sunday and the other said that she had classes that day and was nervous. It was only minor things like that but it was those details that had me a little confused. Keep on writing!
dear vickie and nickel,
i really liked your writing. its sweet. i have to say that was one of my fav. fanfics. good job.
So cute I love it! I read this ages ago and I only just re-read it, but I still find it awesome! Please do a sequel!
-Laura
did you know that poem is also a song. my choir sang it for a compition. love it!!!
Author's Response: Haha...Really? Well, you have to tell me if your choir won with that song! Thanks for the review!