Reviewer: DarkWizardKiller
Date: 11/27/05 11:33
Chapter: one-shot

When a good writer puts pen to paper (or in this case, tickle the keys of their keyboards) magic often happens quite unexpectedly. The wonderful part of it is that no two stories are ever quite the same. For a short fan-fic story, this is a gem! You are wonderfully descriptive and have a unique imagination that translates to the written word most beautifully! Thank you for sharing your talent!

Author's Response: your kind words mean the world to this writer. Thank you so much for your review.

Author's Response: your kind words mean the world to this writer. Thank you so much for your review.

Reviewer: Binks
Date: 04/24/05 7:37
Chapter: one-shot

First I want to tell you that I'm not a big fan of present day fanfictions, especially Hermione ones, but I decided to give this one a try and it's a good thing I did. This is one of the rare present day fanfictions that kept my attention and didn't make me want to shut off the site and say forget aout it. The descriptions of the dream were wonderful and there was loads of background information. You could clearly see it was a dream when Hermione woke up, something that most people confuse readers on. Now for the things that could be changed Hermione always had dreamed of having her Prince Charming coming to her rescue and sweeping her off her feet. This could be Hermione had always dreamed of having her Prince Charming come to her rescue and sweep her off her feet. Hermione, started to feel the heat in the room rise, it started from her toes and rise up to her face as she blushed, a deep red. Hermione started to feel the hear in the room rise. It started from her toes and rose up to he face as she blushed a deep red. Good job....This was one of the one-shots that I have read and it was great.

Author's Response: Thanks for your good constructive review. They mean alot to me.

Reviewer: Torin
Date: 03/28/05 14:32
Chapter: one-shot

Your descriptions of scenes are (as always) impecable. For a one-shot, it was pretty darn good. Not sure why you felt it necessary to become redundant when Hr decided to state her feelings, tho. One-shots are tough to write, but you did succeed in the one thing that makes the difference between "writing" and "being a writer": leave them wanting more. Wish I could give a 9.5 b/c that's what it really deserves.

Author's Response: The reason I found it to be redundant when Hermione stated her feelings to Harry, is because Hermione (in my option) seems to be the type that is a bit old fashion, and she needed to put that behind her in order to get what she wanted. I felt however that I skipped out on one important fact. Telling someone how you truly feel about them, is always going to be one of the toughest things you will ever do. Thank you once again for your review, I very much appericate it.

Reviewer: Jade777
Date: 03/27/05 21:09
Chapter: one-shot

I'm an Harry & Hermione supporter and I'd liked to say that I thought it was awful... Awfully good 'cause like I said I'm an H/Hrm. supporter. It was terrific!!!!!! You should do some more writing on this story.

Author's Response: lol you had me going thier for a minute. Anyhow, I've thought about continueing this story, but a problem exists, I don't plan on writing anymore for this story, and to be quite honest, I'm not sure where I could take it.

Reviewer: Flame girl
Date: 03/07/05 16:55
Chapter: one-shot

I'm not a Harry/Hermione shipper but I felt I should give a few one shots a try. I liked it loads and it was expertly written and had great detail. You get ten from me becuase it was an excellent story.

Author's Response: Thank you for you review, I'm glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: padfootprongs
Date: 02/28/05 17:16
Chapter: one-shot

You are awesome...where to begin? I loved how you gave me a picture of Hogwarts more beautiful I've ever mentally seen. I loved the dream, absance for words, and how soon Hermione told Harry. This fic could easily be continiued. I wanna know what happens! TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS! Bye dear ; ) pfpr

Author's Response: I just have one small problem, I don't know how I could continue this story. I guess I could give it a shot though. Jaislin you may be getting rehired for another editing job.

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