Cute, cute , cute!! Sooo cute!! =D I loved it!!
Well nice try but it kinda really bugged me de whole thing about Ron forgiving Hermoine right away waz really weird u sud 've written 'bout at least 1 whole ch. b/w him forgiving her coz i'm kinda like "wot da hell not right away coz datz not Ronz style" *no offence*
Well nice try but it kinda really bugged me de whole thing about Ron forgiving Hermoine right away waz really weied u sud 've written 'bout at least 1 whole ch. b/w him forgiving her coz i'm kinda like "wot da hell now rihgt away coz datz not Ronz style" *no offence*
If something like that doesn't really happen in book seven, then I'll burn the book!Okay, probably not........I LOVED IT!!!!
Good! a few spelling mistakes here and there, but good overall! But, I don't really get something... so Ron and Hermione have been going out since then and were just hiding it?
sweet! :) a couple of spelling mistakes, but overall, a good fic! keep up the good work. ;)
it was great... just next time, do a little more spell checking
aww that was cute
a job well done! however, im a grammer freak, so FYI: when you're talking about a person, u should say who instead of that. like, instead of she is the one that i want to be with, u should say she is the one who i want to be with. sorry, i do that to my friends all the time, they always say im really annoying, but i can't help it! don't take it the wrong way, i still really liked your fic!
That was BEAUTIFUL!!!!! Do you think that ever happened....????
that was a very good story. lol put some tears in my eyes.
very cute! i really liked how you used the time when harry was in the prefects bath room trying to figure out the egg and used it to show what ron and hermione were doing. though, a bit sadly, it's not true. good fic!
wow. this was a beautiful story. just watch out for the typos, cause it kinda confused me. thats just beautiful. i wish ron and hermione WOULD get together in hbp!
Ohhh, I like it alot. It was very sweet.