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AWESOME!
Great poem!!!!! I like it so much! Keep it up!
Whoa...this Phoenix poem is so great! IT'S VERY GOOD!!!!!!
I HAVE A PLAN!!! A PLAN TO GET U MORE REVIEWS!!!!!! U JUST WAIT!!! tehe..........
I HAVE A PLAN!!! A PLAN TO GET U MORE REVIEWS!!!!!! U JUST WAIT!!! tehe..........
Author's Response: *waits*... you have a plan? wow, so did I but it's not working, lol.
I ALMOST FORGOT! TEN!!!!! ~Cheers!
I HELP U GET MORE REVIEWS!!! U DESERVE IT!!! U know which animal it would be cool to do? A WEREWOLF!!! Or FLUFFY!!! or A DRAGON!!! OH! OH! OH! How about Centaurs? NO! UNICORNS!!! PINK FLUFFY ONES THAT APPEAR IN HARRY'S DREAM IN MY HUMOR STORY!!!! Or you could do plain white unicorns or the golden fawns...
Author's Response: uh... sure! i'll do those animals and dedicate them to you! er, thanks for saying that i deserve more reviews
ME LIKIE!!!! HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE!!!! (that was my immitation of a Cornish Pixie laugh...good thing u can't actually HEAR IT!!!) U R really good @ poems!!! TEN!!!!
Author's Response: hahaha! i sometimes pretend to be a pixie in the bathroom, but I never really managed to imitate their giggle. thanks for the 10! i never really thought that my poems would be good, because I usually suck at rhyming.
Oooh, new rhyming scheme, I see! Well aren't we adventurous? I really like your style, you've really captured the fun-loving, mischievous nature of the cornish pixie.
Author's Response: well, I can't do ABAB for the rest of my immortal life, can I? Cornish Pixies rock!!!
I like it a lot - you've really captured the Phoenix! I also love abab rhythm...pretty... P.S: Thanks for the reviews!
Author's Response: I always liked ABAB poems, too. Thanks a lot for reviewing!
Oooh! PRETTY PHOENIX!!! I like phoenixes (hence my pename) but I also like wolves! (hence my obsession with Sirius Black even though he's more of a dog...) I LOVE DOGS!!! (my poor puppy died in sept 2004 :(...) AND I ALSO LOVE THIS POEM!!! Ps: thanx 4 reviewing my little poem thingy! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! im sorry to hear about you're puppy. :'( lol. funny review (except for the dog and september part). thank you again!
Thats a cool idea! well done.
Author's Response: *wiggles toes* yah! first reviewer! ur a special person!
