This is my favorite story on Mugglenet Fanfiction, and a tie for my favorite fan fic of all time. I cannot fully express how impressed I am with your work. Your writing style is both enthralling and beautifully detailed. Your characterization is loyal to Rowling's but also adds new depth to sides of the less major characters she hasn't fully explored. Your plot twists keep the pages turning, but your story also teaches some pretty powerful lessons. I encourage you to finish that fantasy novel. I for one, would certainly buy it.
whoa, great story! Are you going to write one about what would happen if Kane had turned Remus into a feral? I'm really interested in that! plz?
Filipino or not, I love the way you wrote Oblivious! I love the way everything fits with the real HP series and I love the way the words and ideas flow out of the page and into the minds of the readers. I especially love the twists and turns of each chapter although I wish the end could have been happier or something. Poor Kane...
I've just gotta tell you. I've started reading your story, and no WONDER why it was voted best general fic...AMAZING! Honestly. To come up with a whole new type of werewolf...I don't really know the word for it but you know what I'm saying. Brillant! I can't wait to get further into the story!
WOW. ok, so it's 42 chapters long. believe me, there've been longer ones. although, they did have very short chapters. it's still the best fic i've read so far (but don't tell my friends that) You have a gift, or a ghostwriter.
xxBevxx
You can't kill Lupin! For one thing I need him to be there when Sirius comes back from the dead. The Bevster has decreed!
You bring him back next chapter, right? RIGHT?
i hate u, bloody cliffie writer
Bev (no x's for u)
Technically, emitere (NO capitals EVER) is TO release, emitto (are you sure it's two ts?) is I release. Liber also means book btw, and is not to free, it is simply free.
Sorry, I just like correcting peoples Latin. At least you didn't try to write a sentence, because you sure as hell don't know haow to conjugate verbs
Still, the story itself is great, and really well thought out (and let's face it, one of the few stories to HAVE a plot) It's not cliche like mine all are, so good on you
xxBevxx
I realise I reviewed Oblivious, which you have finished- and which I enjoyed very much - I am not expecting an update of this, my comments were intended for Imperius, which I am enjoying at the moment. I cannot see how to review this, but I would like to review each chapter.
I have been trying to figure out how to review for ages, I dont know if I will manage to get back to this page and review again!
It is refreshing to read such an excellently crafted work as this. You write beautifully, your prose is flawlass, I am enjoying the story and the medium becomes transparent you write so well. I look forward to how the plot develops - I hope Remus and Tonks do get together, I know you said you wouldn't include a relationship between them that was more than friendship, but it would fit very well. They both deserve a little love!
Thank you for writing, I look forward to your updates so much.
This is one of the best stories I have read. It was almost as if JKR was writing it herself. Only thing is, sometimes it seemed as though Tonks was abit manly.Otherwise, all the other characters were just like in HP.
This was a very exceptional story indeed. It was extremely well written, beautifully descriptive, and very touching. And that kind of writing -- the kind that makes you think and feel -- is very hard to produce, and even harder to find. Kudos to you, Pallas. Kudos to you.
Did you choose the name Reynard b/c of sentimental value or something similar? Or not? Just wonderin'.
Omg, the dream was HELLUV AWESOME!!!! ;D
He FINALLY puts two and two together!! *rolls eyes in exasperation*
lol, jk. LOVE it!
Wow!! Fabulous chapter if i do say so myself! ^^
Now... ZOOM! On to the next chapter!! :D
I'm all smiles!! :)
A fitting tribute indeed... ;)
I was beaming the whole time!!! ^^
fabulous fabulous!
Sigh... This is so good... ^_^
I heart remus! ;D
Hi! A great friend of mine recc'd this fic and i daresay its just as fabulous as she said it is!! So far, its extremely well-written and captivating! i can't wait to read on!!
Much love,
Saffy
