Definitely makes me want to keep reading. Nice story.
Very intriguiging plot/storyline. Like the characters.
Interesting beginning. Like the premise so far.
I may have already mentioned this but I love the way you use the title to forshadow.
I LOVE the psychological and emotional battle. The contrasts between Kane's strong body and weak mind and Remus's strong mind and weak body is very ironic. Brilliantly written, I love it.
did I mention that I like your chapter names too? I know it seems like a small thing, but a lot of fanfiction authors can't seem to come up with something simultaneously creative and relevant.
I love the way the title ties into everything, both in random descriptive words and in the actual plot. Good work. I love this story, its my second time reading it through.
I just finished reading this. It was amazing! You are a very gifted writer
Just finished reading this for the 3rd time, stil as good as the first time, and I'm still noticing things I didn't notice the first time roud!
I've just started reading this for the 3rd time, it never gets boring!
seriously, this is like the best fanfic that i've ever read! it was brilliant! it feels like it's something that i could just read all over again! i loved it! :D
I really, really like this. excellent.
yeah, this is an evil cliffie.
Danae Trebond---!!!!! nice one..
oh man, i feel so sorry for lupin. idiot.
this is terrifying.
the length of your chapters is not a bad thing--it simply gives you enough room to fully develop your characters.
why can't poppy make the scars go away?
the way you write lupin and tonks, I just don't think it is right for them to end up together. I usually like that pairing, but in this story it just doesn't seem appropriate.
I really like the way you write lupin's voice. it seems very true to his character. I just read a fic where lupin sounded like an american teenage girl....you put just the right amount of sensitivity and wisdom and humor and sadness into him.