Reviews For Oblivious
Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/17/09 0:45
Chapter: Full Circle

A more perfect ending chapter could not have been written. You've more than outdone yourself once again. Look forward to reading more of your stuff.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/16/09 14:25
Chapter: A Quiet Word

More than awesome. More than perfect. I cannot conceive of any other way Remus would have or could have handled the meeting with Kane. Pure Remus. Not a word came out of his mouth that did not sound perfectly natural for him. Love your stuff.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/16/09 13:30
Chapter: Ready or Not

Sort of like Dead Man Walking.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/16/09 2:18
Chapter: Acceptance

Very interesting. Don't know if I'm going to like what I hear, but I really wanted Remus to have this "talk" with Kane.And I really want it to be safe for Remus.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/16/09 1:23
Chapter: Hiding

Awesomeness seems to run in your chapters. Especially when you're putting one over on your reader's while leaving broad hints.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/15/09 20:21
Chapter: In From the Cold

Interesting beginning to a relationship. Be fun to see how it progesses.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/14/09 23:17
Chapter: By Invitation Only

Kane is up to something and I know I'm not going to like it.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/14/09 0:04
Chapter: Visiting Time

Like finding out that Isaacs/Kane was outsmarted because his potential victums had been taught by a werewolf how to effectively slow down and/or stop one if you can find the right tools.
Snape is a slimey git. Potentionaly a good slimey git, but a slimey git nonetheless.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/13/09 0:42
Chapter: Exposed

You're still doing it. Writing awesome stuff. How could you not write the newspaper article? It would not be the same story without Rita's making a total arse of herself. The student's would probably willingly step on her beetle form with great glee. The student's are praising Remus ingenuity in getting the Reversal Spell to Hermione, for helping them to save Snape, for fighting for them.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/13/09 0:14
Chapter: A Fine Mess

My faith in your writing having been justified I freely admit that you have been perfect once again. Obviously the part of you doing the writing subconciously knew Polyjuce Potion would not have the normal effect with a half-giant. You were just pretending you didn't realize what you did.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/12/09 23:15
Chapter: The Lull of Moonset

Awesome. I should have realized this was where you were heading. Your hints that all was not as it seemed were huge. I did suspect. The fire-call from Albus was a dead giveaway. If Remus was dead, Dumbledore would have flooed to Winter Hollow in person. That Remus let go was just his falling into unconciousness. I've been saying for many chapters you write really, really good stuff, you've proven me right again. His unconcious self continued the fight and ultimately won. Your A/N notes also gave it away.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/12/09 22:32
Chapter: The Fallen

Still reading. Still hoping.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/12/09 21:38
Chapter: Under the Moon

Still reading

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/12/09 21:23
Chapter: The Alpha of Hogwarts

I will read the rest of the story. Commenting is something else again.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/12/09 20:59
Chapter: Liber Emitto

You've outdone yourself again.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/12/09 20:50
Chapter: Too Close to Home

Fantastic! Absolutely fantastic!

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/12/09 19:54
Chapter: The Draw of the Moon

And another, Oh shit!

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/12/09 16:20
Chapter: The Aconite Maelstrom

Great scene. Well written. A recalcitrant Remus is not a bad thing. He does tend to go it alone more than necessary.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/12/09 16:06
Chapter: Facing the Music

Another great chapter. :) You have a wonderful talent and you use it well. I'm not big on romance stories. As a side issue in a story it's okay. Action, adventure, and mystery are better.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/12/09 15:52
Chapter: A Night in a Cage

Still going strong. This is going to be a very interesting, uh, conversation between the three.

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