Reviews For Oblivious
Reviewer: chloish
Date: 09/06/05 17:11
Chapter: Waiting

Absolutely fabulous! Although we all know Remus did turn out okay, I was on the edge of my seat the entire time! Excellent, Excellent, Excellent! This is positively one of the best fanfics I've ever read. :)

Reviewer: LadyAssana
Date: 09/05/05 8:50
Chapter: Full Circle

I can't WAIT for Imperius and In from the Cold to come out. The entire Oblivious story was wonderfully written;you should be awarded a metal or something!

Reviewer: LadyAssana
Date: 09/05/05 8:50
Chapter: Full Circle

I can't WAIT for Imperius and In from the Cold to come out. The entire Oblivious story was wonderfully written;you should be awarded a metal or something!

Reviewer: Jeshi
Date: 09/02/05 20:49
Chapter: Full Circle

Wow... i just can say that, this is... wow... i can belive is over... i had so much fun with it! i love it and there's no more *big kitty eyes [the only puppy i like is Sirius]* simply love the way it ends, it's meorable and a little diferent for what one would expect. You're realy one of my favorites writtes, your new characters areso real, unique, and you can relate them entired to the jk books! i just love them! (well i realy hate Kane but is a good formed character) Hope you'll keep writing.

Reviewer: hp3190
Date: 09/02/05 19:01
Chapter: Full Circle

This is my all-time favorite Remus fic. I've ever read. This was a wonderful story that really followed the stuff from the books really well. This is my favorite fic. I've read on Mugglenet and have been following it since it was posted on the "featured" list several months ago. Props for such an excellent story!!! :D I can not wait for the sequel and any other stories you write. You are an extremely talented writer and should give yourself a HUGE pat on the back (or maybe more like a thump!) for such an awesome story! Thank you so much for this story and journey that we have all gone through with you. Until next time... "OBLIVIOUS!" :D

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 09/02/05 14:15
Chapter: Full Circle

I have to say that this story is my favorite fan fic that I have read. I look forward to reading your next one! You have truly made Remus and Rey live in my imagination.

Reviewer: MereRanger
Date: 09/01/05 16:20
Chapter: Full Circle

Amazing. I love this story- I think it is one of my favorite stories (both fiction and fanfiction) of any that I have ever read. You're a fantastic writer- any books you write I will read. I think the ending fit perfectly into the story- I feel really happy about the ending and Oblivious on a whole. Everything feels complete. You've done a beautiful job and I hope you keep writing!!

Reviewer: Mad_as_a_Fishie
Date: 09/01/05 16:13
Chapter: Full Circle

That was a fantastic ending to a fantastic fic. I really like your style of writing and you really made me feel for all the characters. I loved how you portrayed Tonks in previous chapters, my sides ached with laughter most of the time. I look forward very much to reading your other fics.

Reviewer: lupinwolf16
Date: 08/31/05 18:14
Chapter: Full Circle

Wow.......that had to be one of the best storiest ive read. If it was a little longer, i think that it could rival a Harry Potter book itself :) Im really gonna miss Remus and Rey, they are such great characters. I am now a huge fan of your fan-fics. I put you in my favorites after the 1st chapter ;) You write the best Remus of all in my opinion. (Exept for jkr of course) Anyway, can't wait for Imperius to come out. Hope to read In from the Cold soon. ;) 100000000000000000000000000000/10

Reviewer: jellyhead
Date: 08/31/05 17:50
Chapter: Full Circle gonna miss this story...its...perfection...

Reviewer: Little Loony
Date: 08/31/05 14:31
Chapter: Full Circle

*wipes away a tear* I'm gonna miss you Pallas. I'm gonna miss rushing to work to see if you've updated. I'm going miss your Remus. I'm going to miss Rey so much. You know how brilliant I think your story is and i very sad to see it go. You now have a fan, i shall wait patiently for you to post in from the cold and I can't wait to read Imperius. Good luck with them

Reviewer: MarauderingMadness
Date: 08/31/05 7:18
Chapter: The Howling

Wow. Thanks for writing such an amazing story. Each character was done so well, and everthing was described brilliantly. 10/10 and I look forward to sequels.

Reviewer: mad4sirius
Date: 08/30/05 22:24
Chapter: Full Circle

All I can say right now is wow...your imagery thoroughout this entire story has been fantastic, but this last chapter, it was outstanding. Someone mentioned in a review about your writing being poetic, and I whole-heartedly agree. Your desciptions were so beautiful, I had tears in my eyes. I could almost feel the cold. I could feel the pain of your characters. You did an absolutely excellent job with the ending. It left you feeling satsified, something you don't always get. Wonderful job and I can't wait to read more of your work.

Reviewer: lupinsgirl
Date: 08/30/05 16:04
Chapter: Full Circle

Bravo!! This is an excellent story. I anxiously await your future stories.

Reviewer: Jenn_Weasley
Date: 08/30/05 13:18
Chapter: Full Circle

That was just beautiful *sigh*. A perfect ending to a brilliant story. I have enjoyed Oblivious so much. I'm so glad you will continue writing. I'll be watching for your new stuff. Thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: kikimodo
Date: 08/30/05 0:18
Chapter: Full Circle

thank you so much! it was absolutely wonderful, i can't praise it enough. i even made my best friend read it too and she loved it :D i can't wait for the sequel!

Reviewer: RaeLupinBlack
Date: 08/29/05 20:27
Chapter: Full Circle

Right now all I can say is I loved it!

Reviewer: pheonixtear
Date: 08/29/05 10:32
Chapter: Full Circle

wow. this was the perfect ending to the perfect story. it was great closure to the story, everything fit together. i read too many stories where, at the end of the story, they either over-explain everything or leave many things unfinished. you did neither of these things. i love how you gently finished the story and made it all fit together at the end- the story seemed perfectly finished. this was he best story i have ever read on fanfiction. it was so well written with so much detail, it was amazing. you portrayed your characters so well and made everything so fitting to them. excellant job you are truly a great author.

Date: 08/29/05 10:07
Chapter: Full Circle

This was the very first fan fic I ever read. I was hooked from the first chapter but resolved not to review until the end. I absolutely loved every chapter my favorites being with Tonks and Remus' father. Although you left out the actual "kiss" taking place it did not take away from the ending- it ended as it should be with Remus and his Dad and finally closing the book to the past and living in the present and for the future. PS rating should go higher than 10- :)+++++++

Reviewer: ellidiot
Date: 08/29/05 8:52
Chapter: Full Circle

Perfect. Wonderful. Amazing. Exciting and touching and humourous. I cannot begin to tell you how much i have enjoyed this story. The plot is gripping and your description is excellent, poetic at times. But the characterisation is the real strength of your story, both of canon characters and your own original characters, Reynard Lupin being my personal favourite. The interplay between characters is skillfully handled and always believable and satisfying. Your interpretation of Remus is perfect, his quiet strength being the centrepiece of the story and my absolute favourite aspect of the story.

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