Reviews For Padfoot Prohibited
Reviewer: GWeaz
Date: 04/23/06 13:05
Chapter: Dumbledore Dare

Very nice, I can't believe how utterly insane these guys are. You certainly are exceedingly good at writing humor.

Reviewer: GWeaz
Date: 04/23/06 12:59
Chapter: Diarrhea of the Mouth

Very clever with the candies. Great chapter~!

Reviewer: GWeaz
Date: 04/23/06 12:48
Chapter: Quidditch, Marauder Style

Albus Dumbledore leaned forward on his fists and spoke quietly and calmly, "And how exactly does one play strip Quidditch?"

31 - 'To conquer the earth with an army of flying monkeys' is a bad long term goal to give at career advice.

Sirius is ridiculous, I love it!!!

Reviewer: GWeaz
Date: 04/23/06 12:29
Chapter: Prongs' Potion

*"Help you, I will!" replied Sirius in his best Yoda voice. I liked it, who cares if the dates don't match. Nice chapter!

Reviewer: GWeaz
Date: 04/23/06 12:17
Chapter: Prongs' Potion

*"Help you, I will!" replied Sirius in his best Yoda voice. I liked it, who cares if the dates don't match. Nice chapter!

Reviewer: GWeaz
Date: 04/23/06 12:04
Chapter: Slytherin Skirmish

Rolanda?!?! love it.
"Fine you're Mary Poppins then," he teased. "Practically perfect in every way." Awesome job, yet again!

Reviewer: GWeaz
Date: 04/23/06 11:35
Chapter: Planning Ahead

Excellent chapter, i had my favorite quotes down, but my computer messed it up, so unfortunately you must do without them. Anyway, I love this story and am headed right to the next chapter!

Reviewer: GWeaz
Date: 04/23/06 11:00
Chapter: Mum's Assignment

Breast Implants?!?!? very cute, it had me laughing. Great Chapter! On to the next one, I suppose.

Reviewer: phoe_gurl
Date: 04/21/06 15:03
Chapter: A Legacy Left Behind

am in the same room as my parents, so i am holding my breath to stop laughing. fantastic! i feel all red from lack of breath.

Reviewer: poisened_pink
Date: 04/20/06 10:30
Chapter: A Legacy Left Behind

he he

Reviewer: Frosted Honesty
Date: 04/17/06 10:59
Chapter: A Legacy Left Behind

Ok...I first found this story last summer and I've read it several times, and I suppose it's only fair that I drop a review:-) This story is *EXCELLENT* I don't say that to a lot of people, but I thouroughly enjoy reading it. There were a couple spelling/grammar errors, but it's not really noticable. You have a great plot, and you developed the characters really well. I think you did an exceptionally good job on Lily. It was also nice that you included Peter as if he was one of the group - I personally agree with you; he had to have been good friends with the other Marauders or they wouldn't have trusted him. Overall -- an excellent fic. I really love this story. Also (sorry this is a long review, but there's one more thing I want to say) after reading this story last summer, my friends and I (who are "ruling the school," as they say, this year) decided to make our own list of things we're not allowed to do in our school. Thanks so much for the great idea!

Reviewer: GreyLady
Date: 04/15/06 16:38
Chapter: A Legacy Left Behind

Absolutely hilarious. I LURVE the lists! This story is wonderful on a black day and has been added to my Favorites.

Reviewer: Duckie
Date: 04/15/06 13:48
Chapter: A Legacy Left Behind

Wow this is such a cool story. Sorry I didn't review each chapter but I prefer to review at the end. I would never be able to come up with that many things you wouldn't be aloud to do at Hogwarts. Especially like 'The proper way to report to Headmaster Dumbledore when ordered into his office is, "You wanted to see me, Professor?" and not "You can't prove a thing!"' Sounds like something I would say. Probably written too much now. keep writing Duckie

Reviewer: houseelves4ever
Date: 04/06/06 21:09
Chapter: Slytherin Skirmish

I like this chapter, there is just one correction that I have, James was seeker. That's where Harry gets his talent from. It says so in the first book when Harry is freaking out about quitich and how he doesn't know what he's doing, Hermione shows him a trophy thing, that says stuff about James Potter being an awsome seeker. other than that, it's awsome.

Reviewer: themodernmarauders
Date: 03/24/06 23:34
Chapter: A Legacy Left Behind

that was one really good story! I don't think ive ever laughed so much...

Reviewer: mgle_teacher
Date: 03/11/06 12:44
Chapter: A Legacy Left Behind

lmao. great story! i love how you brought it all back to Harry and his friends. It was quite amusing at the end to re-read the stuff they did in the other books and I had forgotten. lol. Sirius would be proud I assume! lol. And as a teacher myself...I must say that we do keep stuff like that around as a reminder of our most "favorite" students of years past! Kudos!

Reviewer: doorknobs
Date: 03/06/06 12:19
Chapter: A Legacy Left Behind

wow, i loved it! just like to point out that "sirius" is pronouned with a short "i" sound (both of them) si ri us. Otherwise it was really good. The ending was really good, (and quite unexpected) ;)

Reviewer: snivellus614
Date: 02/23/06 19:53
Chapter: A Legacy Left Behind

I give this story a 100 out of 10! I laughed so hard that I actaully started crying, and choking at the same time, which is not something that happens a lot! This story should be in the humor section, not general! I've never laughed so hard in my life, except for when my brother painted his face with my mom's bright red lipstick, but that's a different story...anyways, I loved it, and I will probably be reading this story more than once xD

Reviewer: MagicalMaddie331
Date: 02/20/06 8:58
Chapter: Planning Ahead

I really like how you portray all the characters. They act very much like seventeen-year-olds and are very in-character. Great job!

Reviewer: Natalee James
Date: 02/19/06 14:36
Chapter: Princesses and Professor McGonagalls

Ohhh...okay, never mind the question. I get it. Sorry. Read through the rest of the story. Awesome job :)

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