Reviews For Padfoot Prohibited
Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 07/26/07 16:42
Chapter: A Legacy Left Behind

This last chapter was really really really great! I adored it. I am so glad you worked it in that Harry could feel better after Sirius fell in the DoM. I really liked the things they were talking about adding. I have to agree with you, I love Sirius, and wish he were still around. He was the reason I cried for the first time in the HP series. I made it all the way to the fifth book and then wham. Any way, I have really enjoyed your story and I am planning to read the other two you have posted. I only hope you will continue to update them, because I have noticed it’s been a while. Great story and happy writing.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 07/26/07 16:41
Chapter: Princesses and Professor McGonagalls

An end of the year costume ball with lots of muggle costumes. Huh, never would’ve thought of that. Absolutely brilliant. I loved it, and Dumbledore as Clouseau, hysterical. Having Polyjuice potion and using it would be quite against school rules, but then again it is Sirius and the last night. Great job, and the end of the list was really funny. See you at the last one.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 07/26/07 16:40
Chapter: Purple Hazing

The redecorating of the Slytherin common room and what they did to the dorms and the occupants was so funny, I was laughing hard enough to make me have to re-read twice before I could really get all they had done. Wow, long convoluted sentence there. Sorry. Anyway, I am loving this and it seems to get better as I read. The list is going great and I can’t wait to see what you call the best. See at the next one.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 07/26/07 16:39
Chapter: Ooh, Barracuda

From the A/N at the beginning, I really was expecting crap. But you did pretty well with this one, I am just wondering what Raven and Remus talk about so earnestly. Oh well maybe you will tell us. McGonagall finally figured out detention wouldn’t ave any effect especially that close to the end of school, wonderful. Not bad additions to the list either. See you at the next one.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 07/26/07 16:39
Chapter: Blue Moony

I can definitely see them wanting to skip the truth questions if they have something to hide. Such as the ‘furry little problem’ and what all of the nicknames mean. Great dare for Remus by the way. It was really funny. And apparently I’m not the only one who thinks Dumbledore and McGonagall had something going on behind the scenes. Great additions to the list and see you at the next one. Oh by the way, I wrote these reviews after each chapter and saved them to post after I was finished. I hope you don’t mind, and that you don’t think I’m a speed-reader. Less than one minute to read ten chapters is faster than most computers could upload the pages.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 07/26/07 14:26
Chapter: Dumbledore Dare

Truth or dare is a muggle game that has been used in quite a few fanfics, and I have to say you did a really good job on Sirius’ dare. Dumbledore really is pretty cool about it. The list is still getting better. See you at the next chapter.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 07/26/07 14:25
Chapter: Diarrhea of the Mouth

Now I have the answer to the question I asked you last chapter. The candy was absolutely brilliant. And the list just keeps getting better. Great job. Oh and just as a side note, I wrote all of these reviews and then cut and pasted, that's why no time difference between them. I still have a few more chapters to r/r so I will do them shortly. See you at the next chapter.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 07/26/07 14:23
Chapter: Quidditch, Marauder Style

Just out of curiosity, what are you saying is Sirius’ middle name? Dumbledore was great in this chapter. I really do think he would react to something like this with calm questions and amusement. The list is getting better and better. Sirius is getting a little sappy and slightly OOC though. Great job and see you at the next one.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 07/26/07 14:22
Chapter: Prongs' Potion

I actually didn’t mind the Yoda reference, which sounds kinda funny since I have had issues with the more modern phrases. Strange huh? Anyway that potion was really great and I liked the effects of it. I too loved the movie referenced and thought it hysterical that you could use it for inspiration for a potion in the magical world. Great job.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 07/26/07 14:22
Chapter: Badgering Bellatrix

I liked the interaction with Bella, and hope there is more to come. This excerpt from the list was hilarious. I was laughing the entire time I was reading that part. Great job, and I know you must be tired of hearing it, especially since it was written so long ago, I will not be calling attention to the modern phrases any more. I did want to comment on you’re A/N, Gary Oldman who is one of my all time favorite actor, and who does play an exceptional bad guy, was absolutely perfect for the part of Sirius. Even before the part was cast, I was picturing him as the character when I read it. But to each their own. On to ch-6.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 07/26/07 14:21
Chapter: Slytherin Skirmish

Still enjoying this and even with the ‘modernisms’ I think it works really well. I know you wrote this quite a while ago but I would like to say how glad I am to have started reading it. I am just glad I don’t have to wait for updates on it.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 07/26/07 14:21
Chapter: Midnight Serenade

Still doing great, but there were still some ‘modern’ references. I wonder what McGonagall would do if someone really did come to her with that excuse for wanting to sleep in the girls dorm. Very entertaining. On to ch-4.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 07/26/07 14:21
Chapter: Planning Ahead

Opening conversation between James and Sirius, has a few ‘modern’ phrases. Not precisely the way I expected them to talk. The rest of this chapter was really good though, and I like the fact that you have them using the Room of Requirement for homework. I like the song Moony was singing, and it was really funny for him to do that. I never really thought he would ‘make fun’ of his ‘furry little problem’ in that way. The list Sirius is writing just keeps getting better. See you at ch-3.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 07/26/07 14:20
Chapter: Mum's Assignment

That was really entertaining, and I could see Padfoot and Prongs calling McGonagall mom. Think of the laughs it would receive. Very good start, and I am off to the next chapter.

Reviewer: zotius_221
Date: 07/08/07 16:18
Chapter: Quidditch, Marauder Style

This is my favorite chapter...this whole story is hilarious!

Reviewer: ThreeSimpleWords
Date: 06/29/07 14:44
Chapter: A Legacy Left Behind

That was great. =] But, like others mentioned, what was Raven's big secret?! Ohh, since Lupin told the other Mauraders that she knew he was a werewolf it had been bothering me and I'd been looking out for it. =P

Reviewer: Holly218
Date: 06/28/07 0:25
Chapter: Quidditch, Marauder Style

I really love your story so far, but this is really bugging me. James is a Seeker, not a Chaser. Don't get me wrong--This is definately one of my favorite stories

Reviewer: riddiculusvampire
Date: 06/20/07 11:55
Chapter: A Legacy Left Behind

I loved it!! I swear i almost fell off my chair from laughing so hard!!!!!!

Reviewer: riddiculusvampire
Date: 06/20/07 11:08
Chapter: Blue Moony

yeah, i was wondering what had happened to raven. i really like your story! i can really imagine sirius writing and doing all of those hilarious things!!

Reviewer: lillylover77
Date: 06/10/07 17:55
Chapter: Mum's Assignment

Love IT!

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