Reviews For Dry Your Eyes
Reviewer: Emily_Anne
Date: 08/11/08 19:39
Chapter: Dry Your Eyes

Poor Severus.
And poor Bella.

Reviewer: Welshgreengrl
Date: 11/18/07 20:25
Chapter: Dry Your Eyes

ooooo its sooo sad!! but i like the song and the story is good!!! i love the bellatrix/snape pairing!!!! keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: Gryffindor Lion
Date: 07/23/07 20:33
Chapter: Dry Your Eyes

wow intence

Reviewer: Prilla
Date: 03/30/07 10:08
Chapter: Dry Your Eyes

i like the way the characters are portrayed

Reviewer: smilesallaround
Date: 03/21/07 21:33
Chapter: Dry Your Eyes

awww so sadddddd

Reviewer: Skewper
Date: 02/16/07 23:49
Chapter: Dry Your Eyes

..its over

great story... though according to sirius, bellatrix loved the pure blood mania... but there ws a gud plot in story...

well written

Reviewer: lucozade
Date: 01/22/07 11:25
Chapter: Dry Your Eyes

Wow... That's really good. The flashbacks were a good add on. Wow....

Reviewer: theIotherIweasley
Date: 12/06/06 15:54
Chapter: Dry Your Eyes

this story is soo sad but soo good

Reviewer: RupertsPheonix
Date: 07/31/06 9:11
Chapter: Dry Your Eyes

I've never actually heard the song, but the lyrics go perfectly. I haven't even considered this pairing before, but you do a wonderful job... My favourite line has to be, "Well, good luck fucking the brains out of Rudolph or whatever his name is," mainly because Snape's bitterness just seems so perfect there. It's like every syllable would be filled with emotion. Really good job! +100/10 --RP

Reviewer: RupertsPheonix
Date: 07/31/06 9:09
Chapter: Dry Your Eyes

I've never actually heard the song, but the lyrics go perfectly. I haven't even considered this pairing before, but you do a wonderful job... My favourite line has to be, "Well, good luck fucking the brains out of Rudolph or whatever his name is," mainly because Snape's bitterness just seems so perfect there. It's like every syllable would be filled with emotion. Really good job! +100/10 --RP

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove
Date: 03/02/06 12:51
Chapter: Dry Your Eyes

Though I am a real big fan of Bella/Rodolphus, this fic was deeply moving. It was sad and intense, and I wanted to cry. The beauty of your word set off a vivid picture in my mind. I absoulutely adored the part right before Bella walks down the aisle. This was beautiful- more beautiful than any fic I have ever read. The most beautiful. *tears run down face* You are brilliant. I am putting this into my favorites. Keep writing!

Reviewer: Shy
Date: 12/29/05 10:31
Chapter: Dry Your Eyes

It's the first time I read a Snape romance fic, and I really liked it. Bad guys can be in love too... Very moving. I'm not sure Bellatrix would have returned his love, though. But that's what fics are for: coming up with things unexpected.

Reviewer: Riyo
Date: 10/22/05 12:47
Chapter: Dry Your Eyes

This was a very interesting and intriguing read. You have clearly your own style of writing and it works very well. I am usually not one who enjoys reading Snape romances as the cliches in that genre are hard for me to tackle. But you made me love the romantic part of Snape, his loyalty, his pain, his love for the one woman in his life: Bellatrix.

I like your portrayals of both Bellatrix and Snape, they seem very real and for the first time more like persons who have a tender and loving side, a side we do not see in the books. The contrast between the young Snape and the older Snape is also very touching and subtly done. You give a reason for why Snape has become the bitter man he is today, a reason I very much like.

My favorite part of the fic was the tender scene before she stands before the altar, where he asks her not to do it. His words "last chance" are so final and make it more dramatic, but not too much. You keep a good balance between drama and angst, not passing the line into wangst.

However there was one thing that irked me. I loved your Snape perspective throughout the story, it made it personal and drew me in: it made it real. At the end of the story you suddenly changed perspective to all-knowing with a somewhat learning tone. This broke up the nice flow you had going and made me pull back from the story, detaching me a bit from what happened instead of leaving the angst that was there during the whole story. Other than that it was a lovely read. Very well done! And I will be sure to read some of your other stories now. Great job!

Reviewer: Masked One
Date: 04/24/05 14:42
Chapter: Dry Your Eyes

Iíve never seen a Bellatrix/Snape story, though now Iím rather enthralled. I donít find the idea of actual love between them very likely. However, the point of fanfiction is to consider different views, so Iím not writing it off just because of that.
The scene I liked the most was their fight. It captured the anger and desperation they would be feeling, as well as the young age they were at. It was perfect- absolutely perfect, swearing included. Very nice.
In contrast, my least favorite scene was at the wedding when Snape ran up to Bellatrix. I just donít think heíd do that, especially because he sounded very adult throughout the *present time* portion of the story. To me, it seemed OOC for the Snape you had created.
I really liked the contrast between the *present time* and *flashback* Snape. He seemed very much older and more cynical in the present time than in flashbacks. It did a wonderful job illustrating the way his character grew throughout.
The writing in this story shows a lot of potential- and when I say this I mean it as an honest compliment. It had moments of brilliance, and a few places that needed ironing out. I will be reviewing your other stories and watching for updates, all the while expecting great things from you.

Author's Response: Thank-you so much for taking the time to review for my story! I'm glad you liked the contrast between older and younger Snape, and that it was subtle enough. I do have trouble with that sometimes! Now that you mention it, I do notice that the wedding part was a little OOC. Hmm...I might edit that! Thank you again for your review! (My account hasn't been letting me leave these responses...I hope it does this time!!!)

Reviewer: Irresistable Poison
Date: 03/07/05 21:59
Chapter: Dry Your Eyes

Very well written and quite sad actually, I thought it was going to be really bad from that little warning you gave up the top but you surprised me! I don't think you should have that there, it might deter readers from a really wonderful fic...

Author's Response: Oh thank you! I dunno...I am not a very confident person...^__^ I might remove it though, to stop people from judging...thank you again for the compliment!

Reviewer: Croyez
Date: 02/18/05 16:33
Chapter: Dry Your Eyes

Wow...this was such a great one-shot. It carried so much emotion, honestly, at the end of the fic I had a knot in my chest. =) Very well written....I know I could never manage to write such a sad, yet beautiful story. Great job, really. =) Realistic, too...I could definitely see that happening.
Just...fantastic! Bravo!

Author's Response: Wow thanks! *big smile* That review just made my day! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Ron Weasley
Date: 02/11/05 19:58
Chapter: Dry Your Eyes

I love that song, and I love this story. It's so good. It flowed perfectly, and it was so sad. I know two people who had a relationship like that, and it's so sad. But your story is great.

Author's Response: It's destroys people. Glad you liked the song...

Reviewer: ominous_black
Date: 02/10/05 15:47
Chapter: Dry Your Eyes

that was great i really liked it even though i got confused a few times i liked it

Author's Response: Aw thank-you. I'm sorry you got confused...was the format wierd? I tried to make it as non-confusing as possible!

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