hey..i think it's good so far..i just wish hermione hadn't taken draco into her house so easily..it kind of made everything so fast..just a thought
This is seriously unfair!!!!!!!!! I need to know what is happening but i can't!!!!!!!!!!! AGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
awesome.hey,i just realized something:where is ron?
is this story going to be dropped? My friend and i have been watching for you to update it and you havent...so what is up?
Much Love and Support
Carisa
?????? is draco still bad after all that hum never would have guessed
Hey I finally found this story! I had been reading it in 2005 but I lost it Bcos I forgot the BLOODY title. It's awesome, keepit up!
GAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!! Cliffies!!!! they shall be the end of me *swoons* please update soon, or I shall perish, and it'll be all YOUR fault!!! is Draco gonna do something good?
great story!!!!!!! I'm waiting for the next update!!!!
WOW! you know what i think i'll stop reading this story all at once! i don't think that hermione would do that at all!!!!!!!!! the story was nice at first but its a bit too much! i mean come on draco and hermione would never ever do that! i mean dude come on but hey you keep up writting and i'll stay away from this story!
but you are a tallented writter but you take it a bit far for me! sorry dude but i'm not going to finish this story!
look this is a good stroy but i think u r taking it a little fast! i mean i would love to see more of draco asking or begging hermione to stay with her and i don't think she would give in so easly to him after he called her mudblood!
and i like that he hugged her when she ran in to the kitchen crying but i don't think draco would hug her right away i mean i think you should put something in between that part, like them talking in his room or on the way to her house!
but hey it was just a thought i had! its ur story and you are way into it and i still didn't read the rest so yeah good job on it i really like it (something new)! anywho off to the next chapter!
Jeez.... why are my reviews always so long.......
AAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (i know this is probably pretty old by now but) HURRY UP AND UPDATE ALREADY!!!!!! Can't you see that you've got loving and adoreing fans sitting on the edges of their seats in anticipation waiting for you to comfort them (well... us), pat us on the back, and say "It's all right! Draco was just acting so the Death Eaters would trust him and then he could stab them all in the back by helping the others to escape!!!!!!!! MUAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! sorry just had to add that last bit in..... Talk about a looooooonnnggg sentence! lol
i think you are one of the most talented writers so far.i loved your story so much im here commenting :) ..i've only got to the second chapter and ive cried. i think your story is amazing and i hope you never stop writing. i don't know what else to say..that pretty much somes it up ':0)
Hey! I sent you an e-mail about downfall (i'm olivia by the way!) but this is by far my fave! just wondering when you're updating. It's brilliant!
Huh? Whats going on?
A good chapter, excellent pacing, though with the long gaps in between each chapter I'm starting to get a little confused...may need to go read previous chapters again...
OMG that is so cliffhanging! How can you just leave us at that! Get writing! I neeeeeeeeed to know what happens!
haha, laughed so hard about the Fred/George thing. PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!
