Reviewer: bittersweet8186
Date: 02/20/05 6:16
Chapter: Chapter 4 : The New and Most Noble Manor of Potter

Oh... This one was a pretty sad chapter - but it was also very, very lovely. I had a sad smile on my face when I read the last scene. The idea that Sirius created a room for Harry before he died is pretty kind and lovely and so where Lupin's words. What he said was really emotional and his appearance at the beginning was pretty good described and it fit so well to how he (and the other) must feel after Sirus' death. Very good chapter and I hope we'll meet Hermione soon! ;) Lupin's speech to Harry was perfect for there meeting! ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading my story! I love and appreciate your detailed reviews, and I hope to hear from you after every chapter!

Reviewer: Siri_luver
Date: 02/19/05 18:17
Chapter: The Unexpected

wow, i love your story, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! your an awsome writer!

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment! *bows deeply* I'm happy you're enjoying the story!!

Reviewer: Emma06
Date: 02/16/05 20:50
Chapter: The Unexpected

Incredible! Well written and the semi-cliff hanger at the end was good. This story is becoming one of my top stories. Good job and keep up the good writings. Chapter 4 please......

Reviewer: hpfan28
Date: 02/16/05 17:49
Chapter: Mirror Mirror

What an excellent story! The way you've written both Harry and Dumbledore is spot on! Please keep writing...I'll be adding this story to my favorites and am hoping for another update soon!

Author's Response: I'm honored and happy that you liked it! Please continue to let me know what you think!

Reviewer: bittersweet8186
Date: 02/16/05 15:32
Chapter: The Unexpected

W-O-W! Just another time when your fiction took all of my breath while I was reading! It's absolutely thrilling! How you described Dumbledore's character and how he chose his words just hit the bull's eye! Your writing-style is just brilliant! I can't wait for more any longer! I'm really looking forward for the next chapter! Great work!!

Author's Response: ! I love your reviews!!!

Reviewer: PhysicalGraffiti
Date: 02/16/05 0:20
Chapter: A Visitor in the Night

Oh, this is wonderful so far! You've written Harry really, really well, and you've captured his intense emotions with ease. Your descriptions are delightful, unique, and charming. The ending of this chapter was spectacular as well, and Dumbledore's comment was right on target! I loved the small bits of comic relief, like when Harry was giggling madly. : ) The only thing I would suggest is to ensure that, next time, characters' thoughts (in this case Harry's) go in italics. Other than that (and that is minor), very well done! I'm excited about this, and I'll definitely be looking for updates!

Author's Response: Thank you for your long and detailed review! I'm having difficulty uploading, my original material does have italics, I just don't know how to put them here... I hope you enjoy the following chapters just as much if not more! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: voldelavie
Date: 02/14/05 15:00
Chapter: A Visitor in the Night

I'm adding your story to my favorites. Please update soon!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm honored you liked it enough to add to your favorites! Please continue to tell me your thoughts!

Reviewer: Emma4Irish
Date: 02/13/05 23:05
Chapter: A Visitor in the Night

AWESOME keep it up!

Reviewer: bittersweet8186
Date: 02/08/05 12:40
Chapter: A Visitor in the Night

*gasp* this story is AMAZING! how could you? lol I read it in facination!! you're a pretty good writer and i really enjoyed your fiction! i can't wait for more and i hope you'll update soon, because this fiction is one of the best i read! i'll add it to my favorites!!

Reviewer: jenkins
Date: 02/06/05 10:22
Chapter: A Visitor in the Night

Wwwoooo cool. Awesome story - keep up the good work!!! I can't wait to read more! Its a really good plot so far so keep it up. Please update soon!

Reviewer: Emma06
Date: 02/05/05 23:06
Chapter: Mirror Mirror

Wow! Really good! I like how the story moves on slowly, just like the real books. Try to make the next chapter longer, and pace yourself! I was a little confused at the end though, other than that, good job. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: emma57
Date: 02/04/05 15:08
Chapter: Mirror Mirror

this is a cool chapter! it kind of is confusing me though, because-was it harry that was doing that, or voldemort? that was sort of confusing. cant wait for hte next chapter!

Author's Response: It was about Tom Riddle. I was attempting to show how similar he and Harry are to one another. One will find love, and thus become Harry. The other only found hatred, and thus became Voldemort. Thank you for the wonderful review, and I hope you continue to read!

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