Reviewer: Hogwarts Alum
Date: 11/09/07 21:09
Chapter: The Rocks upon Which We Stand

your story flows nicely and i enjoy the character interplay. please continue!

Reviewer: asanchez17
Date: 08/15/06 14:43
Chapter: The Rocks upon Which We Stand

i have searched a long time for something different, a little on the dark side, and edgy. This in my opinion is it. It starts where the book left off, and follows along the path that I and I hope others, felt should occur. I am anxiously waiting for further installments. thanks again.

Reviewer: slumbery_sunshine1
Date: 03/07/06 1:00
Chapter: The Rocks upon Which We Stand

Good story! I love it so far, write some more! Quick!

Reviewer: 5589
Date: 07/04/05 23:35
Chapter: Mirror Mirror

I'm thinking that this character was neville who caused that because perhaps when Voldemort Attacked Harry, harry sent some powers into neville when they made contact.

Reviewer: SpikeSpiegel
Date: 05/29/05 21:26
Chapter: The Rocks upon Which We Stand

Awesome story. Everybody seemed to notice the BUSHY HAIRED KIDS comment. It made me smile. I hope you update soon. I hope there's more Harry and Hermione interaction in the next chapter, also. Great job, overall, and keep writing, please.

Reviewer: Emma06
Date: 05/29/05 20:51
Chapter: The Rocks upon Which We Stand

Almost 2 months!!! Where's my favorite story!!!

Reviewer: Grimme
Date: 05/22/05 15:06
Chapter: The Rocks upon Which We Stand

I love the story - tis my favorite by far - please continue, it's been so long since you've updated!

Reviewer: isskibum
Date: 05/07/05 18:25
Chapter: The Rocks upon Which We Stand

hey great story!!! I love how dobby keeps saying that hermione is harrys girlfriend...i wonder did hermione already tell dobby that she likes harry? lol neway please update soon!! I love it so far!!

Reviewer: tarawent
Date: 04/14/05 14:45
Chapter: The Rocks upon Which We Stand

This was a great chapter. Anytime you have Harry and Hermione interact it puts me on the edge of my seat. This is one of the better ships I've read, subtle and well written. Keep up the good work and update soon. Thanx for the great read!!!

Reviewer: SeaIsleWitch
Date: 04/12/05 18:06
Chapter: The Rocks upon Which We Stand

*I'm finallly able to review!* This was a wonderful chapter! Firstly, I loved your imaginative dreams....I'm still thinking about the snake one and I hate snakes! Harry's dream about the snitch was transparant to me: the snitch represented his heart's desire -Hermione - and Harry understood that the snitch "caught" him. Dobby is one of my favorite characters, so I enjoy any bit of him you include. It was quite decent of Dudley to alert Harry of his telephone call. I've enjoying your story, keep writing and I'll keep reading!

Reviewer: Lumos
Date: 04/08/05 17:20
Chapter: The Rocks upon Which We Stand

Have only just been able to find time to sit down and read the entire story to date. It is definitely one of my favourites - well written and there are some really original ideas. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Emma06
Date: 04/04/05 23:33
Chapter: The Rocks upon Which We Stand

Oh I just loved this chapter also! I loved the convo between Harry and Hermione! It was so sweet and cute! Also, small bushy haired children running around the house!! Sneaky, Sneaky! So a chapter with symbolisim, love, and sneakness! And let's not forget the cute "I wish you were here" convo with Hermione! And then comes the end, with the cute girlfriend/best friend explanation. Tis cute, tis cute. And just when I think the chapter is done, there comes the big bang! A cliffy! Great chapter, great fun, and great anxiety!! A great combination that deserves no less than a 10.

Reviewer: PhysicalGraffiti
Date: 04/04/05 21:39
Chapter: The Rocks upon Which We Stand

Wonderful! I'm always so giddy to find another one of your updates in the queue. My favorite part about this chapter was the direct interaction between the characters. Firstly, you again proved how well you can write Hermione. Her ramblings on the telephone were so hilarious, and yet remained brilliantly true to her character. I couldn't have done better myself. She was sincerely worried and concerned, as is usual with her, and also strong yet vulnerable all at once. That's the Hermione I've come to love in the books, and I'm so happy to see an author has picked up on this as well. In actuality, I could praise your characterization of Harry too. I can't STAND it when a writer makes Harry overly confident. Many disregard the fact that small quirks and such add to character. For example, they may write Harry's dialogue well, but they'll have him standing, sitting, eating, or sleeping in a way that is very un-Harryish. I read one where Harry ate with his back upright, and was careful not to mix his food together on his plate. That makes him seem snotty to me... anyway, you haven't made this mistake, which is another reason I look forward to your updates. Your writing style is comprehensive and descriptive: the perfect combination. I love the subtle detail you add to the scenes, such as how Lupin looked or how Dudley appeared when he handed the phone to Harry. (BRILLIANT part, by the way! I laughed aloud!) Oh, and I caught on to Harry's "bushy-haired kids" remark! Oh yes, that was not lost on me! I can't possibly relay how much I enjoyed that bit! It was so subliminal and small, but that's what made it great. You didn't point it out to the readers, you just let it fly as if it were his natural reaction. Fantastic. As always, I'm eagerly awaiting your next update. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: bittersweet8186
Date: 04/04/05 10:07
Chapter: The Rocks upon Which We Stand

hola! here i am again and i'm so happy you updated! =) oh wow... it can't get any better. can it? i absolutely LOVED that chapter! the dreams were just incredible! the first very scary, but the second dream ... hehehehe! not that bad, not that bad! you just gave us some hints ... very much of rowlings style! i swear your own writing style gets better with every chapter! the second dream was just fantastic! dobby is my hero! LOL i just love him in your fiction! he's so adorable! =D and here it goes ... my favorite scene. harry and lupŘin talking about the future and so on ... so it's BUSHY-HAIRED KIDS galloping about this house?? YAY! you just made it! that was awesome! see my grin? enormous! you're brilliant! love your work! keep on writing - i'm waiting for an update! ;) *hugz* p.s. damn it! why can't i give you more than just 10 laughable points? you deserve so much more!

Reviewer: ama sha_HP
Date: 04/03/05 10:46
Chapter: Dumbledore, and the Impossible

What did you revise? Is this chapter different?

Author's Response: I revised the chapter from it's original form, before posting it here. So no, the chapter is no different for you. I'm try to always be at least one chapter and two weeks ahead, so that I can re-read the chapters and make any corrections to the flow, or simply change the general "feeling" of it making it a better told story on the whole - thus revising it. ;-)

Author's Response: "I'm try"? I meant "I do try..." duh!! :-0

Reviewer: hpfan28
Date: 03/26/05 9:07
Chapter: Dumbledore, and the Impossible

Another great chapter! I love how you are developing things between Harry and Hermione slowly...it's so much more realistic that way! Harry's always been a bit clueless about girls which is part of his charm! The ending of the chapter was too funny! Another 10 out of 10! Please update soon :-)

Author's Response: Thank you so very much!!! I definitely agree, how thick can Ron and Harry be anyway? I'm thilled you liked the chapter!! Hopefully you'll like the next just as well!!

Reviewer: SeaIsleWitch
Date: 03/25/05 21:12
Chapter: Dumbledore, and the Impossible

I really like this story and this chapter was fun! I hope someone straightens out Ron....it's refreshing to see a fic with Luna showing an interest in Ron. (I think that she does like Ron in the books, but so does Hermione.) Nicely written, just watch your spelling. I'll check back to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks again! I always appreciate your thoughts! :-) I also believe Luna fancies ron, but Hermione? I may be a bit biased... Hope I'm not wrong ;-} I ran my spell checker again, it's set for UK english, couldn't find anything wrong... Then again, I do get words jumbled up sometimes! Hope you like the next!

Reviewer: Emma06
Date: 03/22/05 19:48
Chapter: Dumbledore, and the Impossible

Oh another great chapter. And yes tis true, I like this story better here anyway! After all, there's no shame in waiting a little longer for a new chapter! The longer the wait, the better the chapter after all! Anyways...typical Harry, always worrying about the people he cares about *cough, cough, loves*. And it's about time that Moody got hit, if I heard Constant Vigilance one more time, i think I would have cursed him myself. This story is developing lovely, and it looks like you are developing a good fan base. I know you won't let us down. Bring on the Burrow!

Author's Response: You're the best Emma06!! What more can I say?

Reviewer: ama sha_HP
Date: 03/22/05 17:58
Chapter: Dumbledore, and the Impossible

I really am enjoying your story. The flow is pretty good and I feel like I'm really reading a good fiction novel. If I could just take this to a comfy chair and wrap up into a warm blanket, I'd be set. You write very well...I love it.

Author's Response: Add a large fireplace and a common room and I'd be set right along with you! Thanks for the wonderful review, I hope you like the next just as well :-)

Reviewer: bittersweet8186
Date: 03/22/05 17:29
Chapter: Dumbledore, and the Impossible

what a chapter! the end was pretty funny! =) and harry's so cute! does he still not realize what hermione means to him? i mean - it's obvious! isn't it? and ron's letter was so cool! LOL yeah, yeah... something#s going on with luna, eh ron? ;) but what are hermione and ginny talking about in their letters? do they discuss their love-interests? hope the next chapter is up soon! but don't hurry, if you have no time to write! i'm just looking forward, that's all!

Author's Response: I am so happy you like it! I always look forward to hearing from you :-) You have a very good idea of what's going on with the girls ;} Thank you for your care, and I hope you like the next just as well!!!!!

Author's Response: Must I say just how much I appreciate you? :luv:

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