Reviews For The Sweetest Sin
Reviewer: ThatHPFan
Date: 05/01/12 2:13
Chapter: His Hidden Heart

Yes, this chapter was a lot like Beauty and the Beast, but that's fine by me, because I love Beauty and the Beast. I didn't really like how there was no follow up of the bathroom scene in this chapter, and yet that was only the first half, know what I mean. It's kind of awkwardly placed in the story.

Reviewer: ThatHPFan
Date: 05/01/12 2:04
Chapter: No Idea

No, it was good that Hermione told SOMEBODY, but I always figured it would be her mirror and Kathryn would overhear and then let it slip without realizing what it meant. I was a little unsure about it being Blaise, but hm, I guess I'll see how this works out.

Reviewer: ThatHPFan
Date: 05/01/12 1:57
Chapter: The Only One

Hee hee, oooooooooo, Pansy is not going to be happy with Draco when she finds out that he is consorting with a Mudblood servant!!

Reviewer: ThatHPFan
Date: 05/01/12 1:51
Chapter: The Beauty in the Breakdown

Harry and Ron DIED?!? ACK!!! Heart attack happening right here!! No, I liked the second half much better. I've always wanted a fairy tale garden!!

Reviewer: ThatHPFan
Date: 05/01/12 1:44
Chapter: Her Own Secret

Awwwwwww I love Kathryn so much!!! She is so innocent and adorable!! Hm, I think I know what Pansy's problem is!

Reviewer: ThatHPFan
Date: 05/01/12 1:40
Chapter: No Amount of Pressure

Oooooo, I already don't like Tommy. But was it intentional that Kathryn was more like Draco and she's the one that likes Hermione, or was that just somewhere my brain went.

Reviewer: ThatHPFan
Date: 05/01/12 1:33
Chapter: Crimson

Ha, man I thought that Hermione's dream was actually a memory of earlier that night with Draco, and I was like, "Really? Draco is an Animagus? That's pushing it!" But then I realized it was Hermione's dread of what happened, and it was so perfect.

Reviewer: ThatHPFan
Date: 05/01/12 1:28
Chapter: Up to Something

He he he, evil laughs all around. I feel so bad for Hermione right now. I do think, however, that if I'm smart enough to figure out what Draco wants from her, shouldn't she be?

Reviewer: ThatHPFan
Date: 05/01/12 1:24
Chapter: Observations

What IS she doing there? Naughty Hermione!! I actually had to turn away for a moment during that breif rape scene -- I mean, you can easily find much more graphic scenes on the internet, but that just made me... I dunno, I felt kinda scared for a moment. It's hard to describe. It was good though.

Reviewer: ThatHPFan
Date: 05/01/12 1:17
Chapter: Meeting the Malfoys

Wow, I'm already in love with it and barely anything has happened. Why does Draco always have to be such a snot? Please tell me that he isn't like that through the whole story?

Reviewer: Danielle Phear
Date: 04/26/12 4:41
Chapter: His Hidden Heart

:O I love blaise XD But i love it so far :3

Reviewer: PotterJay4lyfee
Date: 04/25/12 23:37
Chapter: Epilogue

:') Even though Hermione and Draco were not reunited, I love this epilogue!!!!! It's so moving and well-written.

Reviewer: PotterJay4lyfee
Date: 04/25/12 23:29
Chapter: Her Greatest Love of All

:'( What?! How could they not end up together??

Reviewer: PotterJay4lyfee
Date: 04/25/12 22:13
Chapter: No Idea

I swear I thought it would be Goyle!!!! Or even Crabbe!!!!

Reviewer: BrokenPromise
Date: 03/03/12 22:16
Chapter: Epilogue

This metaphor...wait a minute. You said Hermione's tears missed the was the raindrop Iris' tear? Or maybe Draco's?

Reviewer: BrokenPromise
Date: 03/03/12 18:19
Chapter: The Only One

All Kathryn wants is to catch your attention, but you brush her off every time she tries. And Tommy - Tommy looks up to you. It's your job to teach him everything he needs to learn but no, you never even look at him...
"Don't even attempt to tell me how to raise my children," he yelled.
I swear this is from the Sound of Music.
But so far this is really good. :)

Reviewer: Jash
Date: 11/13/11 16:36
Chapter: Epilogue

You made me cry dear..thank you for this story..!!

Reviewer: half_kneazle
Date: 11/12/11 21:20
Chapter: Epilogue

Amazing....absolutely amazing. You had mr bawling through the whole thing :,)

Reviewer: JodieAntonia
Date: 11/09/11 19:47
Chapter: Epilogue

Loved This Story So Much All The Times I Have Read It. Brings Me To Tears Everytime. Its Got To Be One Of My Favorites. Copied It To Kindle So I Can Read It Whenever I Want. You Are Amazing!

Reviewer: pretzelstik
Date: 09/27/11 2:55
Chapter: Epilogue

So I'm a fan of tragedies, and have gotten accustomed to many (in fact, most multichaptered Dramione fics I read are tragedies). This though, it breaks my heart. It may be the fact I didn't think Draco ever truly loved Hermione, or the fact that he did to the point words can't express that his death was just unfair. It was a lovely story, though, and even though I feel oncoming sickness and a heavy heart, I must say it was truly magnificent.

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