Awwwwwww I love Kathryn so much!!! She is so innocent and adorable!! Hm, I think I know what Pansy's problem is!
Oooooo, I already don't like Tommy. But was it intentional that Kathryn was more like Draco and she's the one that likes Hermione, or was that just somewhere my brain went.
Ha, man I thought that Hermione's dream was actually a memory of earlier that night with Draco, and I was like, "Really? Draco is an Animagus? That's pushing it!" But then I realized it was Hermione's dread of what happened, and it was so perfect.
He he he, evil laughs all around. I feel so bad for Hermione right now. I do think, however, that if I'm smart enough to figure out what Draco wants from her, shouldn't she be?
What IS she doing there? Naughty Hermione!! I actually had to turn away for a moment during that breif rape scene -- I mean, you can easily find much more graphic scenes on the internet, but that just made me... I dunno, I felt kinda scared for a moment. It's hard to describe. It was good though.
Wow, I'm already in love with it and barely anything has happened. Why does Draco always have to be such a snot? Please tell me that he isn't like that through the whole story?
:O I love blaise XD But i love it so far :3
:') Even though Hermione and Draco were not reunited, I love this epilogue!!!!! It's so moving and well-written.
:'( What?! How could they not end up together??
I swear I thought it would be Goyle!!!! Or even Crabbe!!!!
This metaphor...wait a minute. You said Hermione's tears missed the flame..so was the raindrop Iris' tear? Or maybe Draco's?
All Kathryn wants is to catch your attention, but you brush her off every time she tries. And Tommy - Tommy looks up to you. It's your job to teach him everything he needs to learn but no, you never even look at him...
"Don't even attempt to tell me how to raise my children," he yelled.
I swear this is from the Sound of Music.
But so far this is really good. :)
You made me cry dear..thank you for this story..!!
Amazing....absolutely amazing. You had mr bawling through the whole thing :,)
Loved This Story So Much All The Times I Have Read It. Brings Me To Tears Everytime. Its Got To Be One Of My Favorites. Copied It To Kindle So I Can Read It Whenever I Want. You Are Amazing!
So I'm a fan of tragedies, and have gotten accustomed to many (in fact, most multichaptered Dramione fics I read are tragedies). This though, it breaks my heart. It may be the fact I didn't think Draco ever truly loved Hermione, or the fact that he did to the point words can't express that his death was just unfair. It was a lovely story, though, and even though I feel oncoming sickness and a heavy heart, I must say it was truly magnificent.
you are very gifted writer, your story is amazing, gripping and full of surprises.
Umm, students finish Hogwarts at 16 and you said it was 3 years after graduation which means they have to be at least 19! and tommy and Kathryn should be a little bit older... just saying
but the story is awesome so far