waaaaah..hahah..love this chapter! i can die now.. ;)
im reading this again..ur even more brilliant than i remember..
Sad story, bit depressing even.
It made me cry, it was touching.
I somehow wished for a "magical" happy ending (altough im not a fan of HG/DM shippers)
But allas....
Your a good writer, keep up the good work.
i had a teeny feeling it might have been him. idk why.
fabulous chapter though! =D
this is good.
i'm curious about the tree. =)
This is pretty intense, but it has definately captured my interest. I think it was an outstanding first chapter! =)
wow...unimpressed. The plot was all over the place. Your writing skills are fair, but nothing extraordinary. There were so many inconsistencies with the characters attitudes that they came across as schitzophrenic. I read the first half realized how not well written the story was and skimmed the rest. I hope you acctually find a plot in your story next time.
thanx,
dogo
i read this at work one day bc i was bored. and incidently ended up crying my eyes out.
very well written. of course i wanted the fairy tail ending, but i think you wrote the ending very tastefully.
Oh. My. Goodness.
Wow. You sure know how to make a person tear up.
It was perfect.
The entire thing.
I can't even begin to describe how I feel about it. The emotion you wrote seemed effortless.
Flawless job.
Thankyou. I will always cry for this story, but I will never regret reading it...
Wow. One long story! It kept me intrigued. Well done.
ackk!!!!! draco is sleeping with another women, pansy is sobbing her eyes out, hermione tells her deepest, darkest secret to pansy and its blaise zabini.... woah baby that is too much for me to comprehend into my lttle mind!!!
really good!!!!! this is a really interesting story.
That was one sad, sad fan fic....*sniff!* I read it all in one go, and, well, it just broke my heart....
omg, wow. ur story held me so captivated i coodn't close it down even though it meant staying up very late to finish the whole thing. i'm almost ashamed to admit i cried in it and i also want to congradulate u 4 a job well done. normally i don't read fic with more than 5 chapters as a rule (i'm very impatient) but ur's is now 1 of my fav's.
thanx 4 a great story!!!
Ummm... Pooorrrr Thomas...GREAT story!
:)