Wow. I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE the reference to Hermoine in the 1st movie and book "I'm going to bed before either of you come up with another clever idea to get us killed or worse, expelled."
When Draco says, "...then kill you or even worse, send you to the MEA again." Genious! Genious! Beyond brilliant!
Wow! I love that. it had me hooked i would spemd every minute i could on here reading this i loved it. i have for ages been looking for a story to do with hermione and draco if harry lost the war and i have found the best on of all. i want to thank you for keeping me hooked and for helping me spend some of my holidays involving Potter without re-read all the books. A great story and keep up all the great story writing !
I thought the rapest was Fenrir Greyback.
waaaaah..hahah..love this chapter! i can die now.. ;)
im reading this again..ur even more brilliant than i remember..
i like what i read so far
Good story. Sad ending :/.
Sad story, bit depressing even.
It made me cry, it was touching.
I somehow wished for a "magical" happy ending (altough im not a fan of HG/DM shippers)
Your a good writer, keep up the good work.
i had a teeny feeling it might have been him. idk why.
fabulous chapter though! =D
this is good.
i'm curious about the tree. =)
This is pretty intense, but it has definately captured my interest. I think it was an outstanding first chapter! =)
wow...unimpressed. The plot was all over the place. Your writing skills are fair, but nothing extraordinary. There were so many inconsistencies with the characters attitudes that they came across as schitzophrenic. I read the first half realized how not well written the story was and skimmed the rest. I hope you acctually find a plot in your story next time.
i read this at work one day bc i was bored. and incidently ended up crying my eyes out.
very well written. of course i wanted the fairy tail ending, but i think you wrote the ending very tastefully.
Oh. My. Goodness.
Wow. You sure know how to make a person tear up.
It was perfect.
The entire thing.
I can't even begin to describe how I feel about it. The emotion you wrote seemed effortless.
Thankyou. I will always cry for this story, but I will never regret reading it...
Wow. One long story! It kept me intrigued. Well done.
ackk!!!!! draco is sleeping with another women, pansy is sobbing her eyes out, hermione tells her deepest, darkest secret to pansy and its blaise zabini.... woah baby that is too much for me to comprehend into my lttle mind!!!
really good!!!!! this is a really interesting story.
That was one sad, sad fan fic....*sniff!* I read it all in one go, and, well, it just broke my heart....